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    MY first post.

    The Oxbow is a little river that winds its way alongside the river channel in Penticton BC. I live about 30 feet from where I took these pics. Went out early one morning shortly after getting my new camera. I was looking to see if a Blue Heron that visits often was there but of course it wasn't. I took a few shots and I kind of like the one with the cattail. I noticed something on a log on the far side of the Oxbow and zoomed in and found it was a turtle. I took the picture at almost full zoom hand held. (Forgot my tripod) I would appreciate any comments. I know I have a lot to learn and am anxious to get started..

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    Re: MY first post.

    Sorry but here is the second picture I mentioned in my original post.

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    Re: MY first post.

    Basically not bad, Art, but I would crop a fraction closer in each case.

    The turtle is getting somewhat 'lost' amongst all that confusing background. Reducing the height by around a quarter, and a similar amount from the sides would concentrate on your intended subject.

    With the second scene, which is quite good overall, there is a lot of foliage on the right which is taking up space without adding a lot to the general view. You could probably reduce the top by a corresponding amount; or try a different size ratio if you want to reduce the right side by a greater amount.

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    Re: MY first post.

    Were you able to zoom in further or move closer on the first image? With the available light you should have been able to handhold for better sharpness.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowman View Post
    Were you able to zoom in further or move closer on the first image? With the available light you should have been able to handhold for better sharpness.
    No.. I was standing right on the bank and the log was on the far side.. My camera has a 42X zoom and I used it all.. I have already cropped about 1/3 of the bottom of the picture but as Geoff F suggested I should crop a little more from the top maybe. I was a little unsteady standing on the edge of the bank and I was surprised it turned out as sharp as it did.. I'm learning with every shot.
    Last edited by asolley; 1st October 2014 at 10:58 PM. Reason: missed a word.

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    Re: MY first post.

    Quote Originally Posted by asolley View Post
    No.. I was standing right on the bank and the log was on the far side.. My camera has a 42X zoom and I used it all.. I have already cropped about 1/3 of the bottom of the picture but as Geoff F suggested I should crop a little more from the top maybe. I was a little unsteady standing on the edge of the bank and I was surprised it turned out as sharp as it did.. I'm learning with every shot.
    I have a camera with a digital zoom function and it was always difficult to hold steady, it always felt as if the extended lens was rotating as I tried to hold steady.

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    Re: MY first post.

    #1 looks nice to be a candidate for selective focusing in PP to blur the background a little bit and concentrate it on your subject -- the turtle? Just a suggestion...

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