Originally Posted by
JR1
To be brutally honest the poses are terrible, they look as if she is bored and the 2 and 3 show a head and especially neck in a terrible pose
The backdrop needs Ironing and should be a seamless black or very dark colour
The lighting is uneven, and made worse by a backdrop that is wrinkled
Personally I would shoot natural light outdoors
You said "grey to split the difference" with Izzie, fine, why ask advice and not take it, shoot grey, it will look bad
Finally none of the shots you have taken show the hair in reality, I suggest you visit a salon and look at photographs taken for catalogues