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    The first one was from last night...I knew that I wanted the light-pole lit tree shot, all I had to do is wait
    for a full moon, then the clouds rolled in. Stuff just happens I guess.

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    A rule broken with these orchids, even number of them...backyard background. C&C would be nice.

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    Re: Two more

    The number of orchids doesn't bother me, at least not in that arrangement. But I wonder about having a fraction less space at the top and more at the bottom?

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    Re: Two more

    I'm not sure what you want me to look at in the first shot, Bill: the bright moon or the bright tree. If the tree were not nearly so bright, I think you would have a nice moody shot.

    Interesting treatment of the background in the 2nd shot. I think I prefer this kind of blurred background to the plainer backgrounds.
    Last edited by FootLoose; 8th November 2014 at 10:14 PM. Reason: Typo. I decided it would be better to shoot this subject on the ground after all

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    Re: Two more

    Both very nice.

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    Re: Two more

    I think #1 needs a bit of cropping...+1 to Greg's comment: both objects are bright as the other, it is confusing which one you were trying to shoot. If it is the tree, then I do not like the moon to be there, you could have just use the effect of the moon to show your tree. I like the colour of the tree though with the moonlight. Now, I am not making sense...I must say goodnight...soon.

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    Re: Two more

    Considering photographing the tree without the moon and framing the tree as is for a very different image.

    The orchids and background are beautiful. That and your previous orchid photo represent a higher level of quality in my mind.

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    Re: Two more

    You guys can't imagine how much I appreciate the feedback on these, and other images.

    It has proven to me that I cannot compose an image in my viewfinder, I waited for over a week
    for the full moon with that tree, assuming that it would be a great image...it got panned on all
    the sites it was posted to.

    The orchids, on the other hand, are nothing more than using thread to anchor them in somewhat of a
    Golden Spiral position>parking them on my computer desk>using tons of light bouncing off the white
    walls>and shooting towards my wooded backyard. Amazingly, the KISS principal strikes
    again.

    PS...I couldn't bring myself to get rid of the flaws in the orchids.

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