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    sunflowers -but not so suuny

    we were driving through northern WY and found a large field of sunflowers i tried a few different angles -- this one seemed to work for me --


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    Re: sunflowers -but not so suuny

    Well seen and photographed. I think it needs a bit of cropping from the top of the first flower from the left...it doesn't need the sky that much. Try looking at it from lytebox and you will see what I mean...just my opinion...

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    i know its a bit off but i think the sky is accented by the dead flowers -- the whole bland lifeless sky contrasted by the wilting flowers thing seems forboding ?? ... but just a thought ........

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    Re: sunflowers -but not so suuny

    I can't think much this morning. My left eye is blurring my thoughts. Maybe I should revisit this image again...

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    I agree with Izzie, but I'd go one step further and crop out the sky completely.

    I think its got a lot of potential!

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    Hi Matthew, I have looked at this a few times, as it basically appeals to me, but I think I would crop tighter around the four flowerheads that I see as providing your basic structure (I see a 5x7 crop that takes off from the top, bottom and LHS) and then (perhaps) selectively process so as to subtly throw a bit more attention on them and de-emphasize everything else.

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    Lemonade from lemons! Nice rescue of a disheartening scene to make a very nice image. I'm not able to recommend a change in cropping that I would prefer - I think you're close as is.

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    cropped


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    Re: sunflowers -but not so suuny

    Quote Originally Posted by MatthewWilliams View Post
    cropped


    sunflowers -but not so suuny
    I forgot to post that I downloaded your image and tried the crop myself, and I preferred your version with the sky...

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