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    Qutub Minar with Moon. C&C Welcome

    Hi, going forward on my photography venture I stopped and clicked another shot. Can you please review it and let me know what exactly is missing for it to make it much better?

    It is a shot of Qutub minar, situated in New Delhi, India. I like the light on the qutub so i choose to shot moon with partial qutub minar. I also like the color contrast of blue vs orange tone (diffused light).

    Please provide your views and suggestion with composition, crop and processing.

    Thank You

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    Qutub Minar with Moon. C&C Welcome

    Update #1 : Half Crop of Qutub Minar

    Qutub Minar with Moon. C&C Welcome
    Last edited by fotugraphy; 5th December 2014 at 03:04 AM.

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    Re: Qutub Minar with Moon. C&C Welcome

    Nicely captured, the moon adds a nice touch.

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    Re: Qutub Minar with Moon. C&C Welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowman View Post
    Nicely captured, the moon adds a nice touch.
    Thank you for your kind review and appreciation

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    Re: Qutub Minar with Moon. C&C Welcome

    Your composition is great, only wish the left side of Qutub was not so dissolved in shadows.

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    Re: Qutub Minar with Moon. C&C Welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by HaseebM View Post
    Your composition is great, only wish the left side of Qutub was not so dissolved in shadows.
    Thank you for your kind review and suggestion. It was a deliberate attempt for such exposure to give strong dimension to the Monument and to provide some mystery for the darks. I tried opening up the shadows and lost the dimension.

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    Re: Qutub Minar with Moon. C&C Welcome

    The lighting and color is very good. But since we see neither top nor bottom of the structure, maybe a vertical crop on the right side, leaving something just more than half of the structure (eliminating the blue sky on the RHS)?

    [The half light/half dark structure would nicely mimic the half light/half dark (unlit) moon]

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    Re: Qutub Minar with Moon. C&C Welcome

    Very nice patterns on the minar, the moon adds to the image

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    Re: Qutub Minar with Moon. C&C Welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by flashback View Post
    The lighting and color is very good. But since we see neither top nor bottom of the structure, maybe a vertical crop on the right side, leaving something just more than half of the structure (eliminating the blue sky on the RHS)?

    [The half light/half dark structure would nicely mimic the half light/half dark (unlit) moon]
    Thanks a lot for your kind review and suggestion. I really love the crop you suggested. Please check the description for the updated image as suggested

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    Re: Qutub Minar with Moon. C&C Welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by bnnrcn View Post
    Very nice patterns on the minar, the moon adds to the image
    Thank you for your valuable review and suggestion

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    Re: Qutub Minar with Moon. C&C Welcome

    Raj, that's exactly what I envisioned. To me it's now a stronger image, but the we all have different perspectives. I think it would look great on any wall.

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    Re: Qutub Minar with Moon. C&C Welcome

    The crop looks much better indeed

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