Nicely captured.
The image is very nice as it is , IMO a square crop would create another nice image
Very nice image. I can definitely see the advantages to cropping it this way to make use of negative space, which tends to lead my eye down to the bathers.
However, I could also see many other variations of that crop being pleasing, including square as Binnur stated...
IMO you still have some negative space in the crop version and it looks very nice too
The edit that Binnur suggested seems to work too, Ashish...I like it better. Funny the things you do when you are young, once one comes of age, it becomes a sort of just stories that starts with "When I was young" or "when we were young"... pretty much similar to the fairy tale start of "Once Upon A Time..." Pictures like this one is reality now with memories for later telling...
Taken from a good perspective Ashish.
My preference here is for the 1st image, I feel the square crop cramps it somewhat. I wonder if it also to do with the centre of the subject/s being more on the 1/3rds?