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    Re: Mute Swans

    Nice set, Christina. The backlighting on the first two worked well with the feathers spread as they were and the reflections. On the third shot I don't think you accomplished what was intended but I like the shot. Awesome detail and good techs. I also like the composition which makes the bird's eye the center of attention. Nicely done.

    The fourth shot is just messy.

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    Re: Mute Swans

    Thank you to all for taking the time to comment, advise and make suggestions. Truly appreciated and very helpful. When I revisit these I will try all the PP and photographic suggestions.

    It's nice to know that the majority seem to prefer the Swans with the light on the wings, as these are my favourites. I shared the 4th swan to demonstrate the view with more frontal lighting but because the surrounding bushes are indeed too messy, even when cropped.

    With respect the the 3rd swan... Thank you. Very nice to hear the feedback on the techs and composition - a great learning exercise for me. I have a few other similar shots, some with the feathers in the body more visible, so I'm going to trying flipping the swan, and if I think it works I'll share in another thread. Dan - Thank you. You're the only person who likes this composition.

    For everyone who commented on the extra space needed, I agree. I don't have a zoom lens with a long focal length so when I get close I always have trouble leaving enough space and I find expanding canvases a challenge to do well. Eventually I'll learn to leave enough space and/or expand canvases with more finesse.

    Chauncey - knowing you you're probably trying to create water which I expect is impossible. It was beautiful sunny morning with light clouds reflected in calm water. The only thing I had to do to my water was reduce the noise (colour speckles seen at full size) (no saturation, sharpening or colour). Your swans are gorgeous and an inspiration to me!

    Graham - I've never seen a Black Swan except in images and of course I envy you your swans. But yes, I expect light shining through black wings would be especially challenging.

    Thank you Louise. Merry Christmas to you and yours, and a belated Merry Christmas to all!
    Last edited by Brownbear; 26th December 2014 at 02:26 PM. Reason: correct name

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