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    Scream. C&C Welcome

    Hi, going forward on my photography venture I stopped and clicked another shot. Can you please review it and let me know what exactly is missing for it to make it much better?

    I was walking though the streets with my camera and suddenly i saw this screaming human face created by the texture of the wall. I really like light at the bottom and boards on both sides to balance the image.

    Please provide your views and suggestion with composition, frame, crops and processing.

    Thank You

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    Re: Scream. C&C Welcome

    Nice capture and good eye spotting the apparition. I'm not even sure if capturing more of the environment would help, perhaps if you caught an unaware pedestrian. Interesting that this formation would be so close to a liquor store/pub.

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    Re: Scream. C&C Welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowman View Post
    Nice capture and good eye spotting the apparition. I'm not even sure if capturing more of the environment would help, perhaps if you caught an unaware pedestrian. Interesting that this formation would be so close to a liquor store/pub.
    thanks a lot for your kind review and suggestion. I will try to reshoot it just as suggested. I hope they havnt fixed the wall. lol

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    Re: Scream. C&C Welcome

    What if only the tree is shown, that would add substance to your title, good shot.

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    Re: Scream. C&C Welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by HaseebM View Post
    What if only the tree is shown, that would add substance to your title, good shot.
    Thanks for your kind review and suggestion. M not able to understand "Tree" here.

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    Re: Scream. C&C Welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by fotugraphy View Post
    Thanks for your kind review and suggestion. M not able to understand "Tree" here.
    Sorry I assumed that was a tree, I meant the part where the scream typeface is seen.

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