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    BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales - post your version here

    RAW file download CLICK HERE (16mb)

    I thought it might be useful to compare how people edit and convert for BW. This is not a competition, it's a comparison to see how others process BW, and hopefully pick up some tips. Don't worry if your skills are not up to some other users here, just have a go anyway. Don't edit any of the JPGs below - they are only JPGs and you won't get comparable results. Use the RAW provided.

    Download the RAW file from the link above and edit/convert as best you can, using any method, then post the results back to this thread, together with a brief explanation of how you did it so it can be discussed. The RAW is a DNG (Adobe format) so it should work in all forms of Photoshop. Let me know if you have trouble with it. The DNG is as it came out of the camera - no processing.

    I shot and processed this yesterday. It was a very bright sunny day at 11:54 about the worst time of the day (supposedly). Used a Panasonic G6 with kit lens. F/13, 1/160s, ISO160, 17mm (it's a mirror-less camera so that's 34mm full-frame).

    As it came out of the camera
    BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales

    RAW Processing in Photoshop CC2014
    There were no real hot-spots in the image, but a very dark area on that end wall and also the bottom-left corner. In RAW I added a radial filter (new to CC2014 I think) to boost exposure and lower shadows in the two dark areas. I also added a third radial to the front wall to reduce the brightness. Added some clarity as that helps a lot with fine detail as in this shot. Added some sharpness. Finally, as I usually do for shots, I went into tone curve on the basic tab and boosted both 'lights' and 'darks' to get a stronger mid-range contrast. Loaded to Photoshop.

    Silver Efex (SE) and Photoshop processing
    Went straight to SE and selected 'high structure smooth' preset. This one is good for where you have a lot of detail, and you want a gritty look, especially on dereliction images such as this one. In the screen below you have a split screen. The left half shows with that preset applied. I also applied a colour filter (those coloured buttons on the right menu). The yellow filter button has the same effect as a yellow or red filter on a lens - making the contrast stronger with the sky much darker. That is what you see on the right side of the image, and at that point I went back to PS.

    Some highlight parts parts of the image were a little dull, especially in the clouds, so I added a layer in PS and used the dodge tool to bring up some of the whiter areas in the clouds and also in the brambles. Final sharpening, and that was about it.

    BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales

    Final result
    BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales
    Last edited by ashcroft; 19th January 2015 at 12:06 PM.

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    Re: BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales - post your version here

    Would love to give this a go, Rob, but no time now; just wanted to make some observations regarding preprocessing. I generally follow Jason Odell's procedure (I have his e-book) and he advises applying a linear tone curve (don't understand why linear), leaving space on the histogram to the right of the highlights and the left of the shadows, and increasing saturation, to create more latitude when using the colour filters and make using Control Points easier. Any thoughts, comments?

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    Re: BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales - post your version here

    Quote Originally Posted by purplehaze View Post
    I generally follow Jason Odell's procedure (I have his e-book) and he advises applying a linear tone curve (don't understand why linear), leaving space on the histogram to the right of the highlights and the left of the shadows, and increasing saturation, to create more latitude when using the colour filters and make using Control Points easier. Any thoughts, comments?
    Yes, I tend to do that, as the Silver Efex processing tends to push in a lot of contrast on some of the presets (if you use them) and if you start off with an image with no leeway it can not work out well.

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    Re: BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales - post your version here

    Rob

    A quick and dirty edit. I deliberately didn't read the details of your edit or look too closely at your final image. My edit details as follows

    ACR
    Shadows 52, Clarity 20 Vibrance 20
    Sharpening 50/0.7/75/26
    No NR
    HSL Red sat 15, Orange 16, Yellow 18
    No lens correction

    Silver Efex Pro
    Global
    Contrast 20, Amp Whites 5 Ampl Blacks 20
    Structure 20

    Control Point on end wall Increae brightness, incr contrast, incr Str
    CP on front wall decrease Br, incr contrast and structure

    Dave

    Comparing to yours, your sky looks more dramatic.

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    Re: BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales - post your version here

    Quote Originally Posted by dje View Post
    ACR
    Shadows 52, Clarity 20 Vibrance 20
    Sharpening 50/0.7/75/26
    No NR
    HSL Red sat 15, Orange 16, Yellow 18
    No lens correction

    Silver Efex Pro
    Global
    Contrast 20, Amp Whites 5 Ampl Blacks 20
    Structure 20

    Control Point on end wall Increae brightness, incr contrast, incr Str
    CP on front wall decrease Br, incr contrast and structure

    Comparing to yours, your sky looks more dramatic.

    BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales
    Thanks, Dave, that looks pretty good. You did the end wall well - it has regained a lot of detail. My sky is more dramatic as I used the yellow filter button. Your fascia wall looks good too - quite contrasty. I think a bit more punch in the sky and it would be excellent. Thanks for doing it.

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    Re: BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales - post your version here

    Looks good, and thanks for the detailed description on how you processed it. I like to get an idea how others work.

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    Re: BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales - post your version here

    Well here is my quick edit.

    BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales

    I did most of my editing on the original image before Raw conversion. The highlights and shadows were both clipped.

    Then put a Curves Adjustment Layer below the B&W layer. Used Curves to selectively boost the highlights and just used the CS5 auto B&W conversion, which seamed to mostly decrease the reds and yellows.

    But possibly some other tweaks to the colours may be worth considering. Darkening the blues a little more might be useful on the sky.

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    Re: BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales - post your version here

    Quote Originally Posted by Geoff F View Post
    Well here is my quick edit.

    BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales

    But possibly some other tweaks to the colours may be worth considering. Darkening the blues a little more might be useful on the sky.
    Yes, I tried that. Making the blues more saturated in RAW makes the sky a lot darker in conversion. I see you are using CS5. You would find the new RAW features in CC2014 useful. The radial tool lets you draw shapes on the images and make quite a few selective changes. Yours in more subtle than mine. I think a more contrasty sky and it would be very good.

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    Re: BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales - post your version here

    A simple change just for fun. Photoshop and a quick B&W adjustment layer and then take the Blue slider down to make it kinda dark and scary?????

    BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales

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    processed in Lightroom

    BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales

    Added clarity to the whole image, converted to B&W (HSL/Color/B&W panel) then tweaked the red channel -18, orange -51, yellow +36, blue - 15.

    Use adjustment brush
    1. on the side of the cottage to lift the exposure and the shadows
    2. On clouds to enhance the whites by dodging (+exp +highlights)
    3. On clouds to burn darker areas (-exp - shadows)
    4. On bottom right of image to add more shadow

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    Re: BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales - post your version here

    Cor blimey, guv'nor

    I spend enough time editing my own images - now I've got to edit someone else's too???

    Not really - I'll have a play tonight...

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    Re: BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales - post your version here

    Quote Originally Posted by dubaiphil View Post
    Cor blimey, guv'nor

    I spend enough time editing my own images - now I've got to edit someone else's too???

    Not really - I'll have a play tonight...
    Stop whinging You live in Northampton, what else is there to do?

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    Re: BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales - post your version here

    Quote Originally Posted by dennybeall View Post
    A simple change just for fun. Photoshop and a quick B&W adjustment layer and then take the Blue slider down to make it kinda dark and scary?????

    BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales
    Pretty good there. I like the sky. Scary is good.

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    Re: BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales - post your version here

    Quote Originally Posted by dan marchant View Post
    processed in Lightroom

    BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales

    Added clarity to the whole image, converted to B&W (HSL/Color/B&W panel) then tweaked the red channel -18, orange -51, yellow +36, blue - 15.

    Use adjustment brush
    1. on the side of the cottage to lift the exposure and the shadows
    2. On clouds to enhance the whites by dodging (+exp +highlights)
    3. On clouds to burn darker areas (-exp - shadows)
    4. On bottom right of image to add more shadow
    Good! Interesting that some of you are using the colour sliders to get different effects. I like the front wall - yours is darker. Nice sky too. Thanks for doing it.

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    Re: BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales - post your version here

    Cannot remember all the fine details (actual slider adjustments) here is the broad brush approach I take.

    Open in Aperture; I have a preset that does the following Increase the saturation by 10%, Definition by 17 and the midtone contrast by 10

    Open in Vivesa Set control points to adjust specific areas In this case I used six; right wall, front of building, lower left vegetation, vines on left side , overall ground vegetation, sky.
    Sky: decrease brightness and warmth, increase contrast
    Right building: increase warmth, shadows and brightness.
    Lower left vegetation: increase shadows, brightness and warmth
    Front of building: increase warmth, and contrast, Decrease brightness
    Upper vegetation: increase warmth and contrast
    Ivy: increase warmth

    Overall raise Structure to 22%

    Open in Silver Effex
    Use sliders in Film Type and work from violet up to red. Darken violet, blue and cyan to get the sky where I want, then yellow green and red for the building and vegetation.
    Increase the grain a bit until I am happy
    Do a slight S curve (drag the midtones down a hair and raise the lighter tones a hair

    Open with NIK RAW sharpener, sharpen to 54

    Check in Aperture for overall look. In this case tweaked a bit more S curve (same procedure as in Silver Effex) Raised the Shadows by 3

    Done

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    Re: BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales - post your version here

    I also did another version. The same as the one I posted above but just with an adjustment layer set to Multiply Mode at 50%, and slightly edited mask to vary the effect.

    BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales

    Incidentally, I will be sticking with CS5. The CC option means having extra software which I don't want and my main editing computer doesn't get near the internet, which you have to do with CC.

    I have an old machine just for Internet use; so when I get a virus I can easily format everything and start again. As happened last year with ransomware which pretended to be a Flash Player Update!

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    Re: BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales - post your version here

    Quote Originally Posted by Geoff F View Post
    I also did another version. The same as the one I posted above but just with an adjustment layer set to Multiply Mode at 50%, and slightly edited mask to vary the effect.
    BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales
    Incidentally, I will be sticking with CS5. The CC option means having extra software which I don't want and my main editing computer doesn't get near the internet, which you have to do with CC.

    I have an old machine just for Internet use; so when I get a virus I can easily format everything and start again. As happened last year with ransomware which pretended to be a Flash Player Update!
    That's seems slightly better than the original Geoff. A bit darker and more contrast. Never had a virus (touch wood).

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    Re: BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales - post your version here

    Here's my attempt:

    BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales


    First up, I pushed the exposure to the right a little.
    Then Edit-Transform-Distort to straighten a bit.
    Then content aware deletion of the signs.
    Then Color Efex, Tonal Contrast
    Then Color Efex, Pro Contrast
    Then Silver Efex, Neutral
    Then Silver Efex, High Structure (Harsh) brushed into the building and foreground
    Then Silver Efex Neutral, brightening the clouds and darkening the sky, brushed into the sky

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    Re: BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales - post your version here

    Quote Originally Posted by dubaiphil View Post
    Here's my attempt:

    BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales


    First up, I pushed the exposure to the right a little.
    Then Edit-Transform-Distort to straighten a bit.
    Then content aware deletion of the signs.
    Then Color Efex, Tonal Contrast
    Then Color Efex, Pro Contrast
    Then Silver Efex, Neutral
    Then Silver Efex, High Structure (Harsh) brushed into the building and foreground
    Then Silver Efex Neutral, brightening the clouds and darkening the sky, brushed into the sky
    Very good, Phil. Yours has some less darker aspects in the brambles than some of the others, which may be better. Think you need a bit more darker contrast on the fascia wall though. I keep meaning to use the brush more in Efex, often the structure added doesn't do much for a sky.

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    Re: BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales - post your version here

    For a different flow, used the red channel out of RawDigger (was hoping for a darker sky) then opened in ACR 4.5 (PSE 6) and cranked the sharpness just a teensy weensy little bit . .

    BW RAW comparison - derelict cottage in West Wales

    I might try the RawDigger linear export to get a more contrasty sky above was exported with gamma (a popular word here, this week).

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