I certainly like it better Marie. To me it looks more like what I would expect. I suspect that the pistil and stamen stalks would be less green in the actual view, more like they are in the first image.
Good for you, Marie! I have a bit of dread when I think about learning to use engineered lighting as I have shot with natural lighting for three years now. I'll have to take the plunge if I want to advance my shooting skills or remain limited to natural light shooting.