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15th February 2015, 03:02 AM #1
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Whimsey ~ Artist's Studio (maybe better without the flower?)
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15th February 2015, 12:44 PM #2
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Re: Whimsey ~ Artist's Studio (maybe better without the flower?)
I quite like that Brian. My only thought is that you could lose the hardware in the BG.
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15th February 2015, 01:41 PM #3
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Re: Whimsey ~ Artist's Studio (maybe better without the flower?)
But then how would I indicate a workshop/studio?
Originally Posted by John 2
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15th February 2015, 02:31 PM #4Moderator
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Re: Whimsey ~ Artist's Studio (maybe better without the flower?)
John - I like your concept here, but the background is almost invisible. I might have tried to push some light onto the tools in the studio to bring them out. Right now they are more of a hinderance and an afterthought and look like they don't really belong in the image.
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15th February 2015, 06:45 PM #5
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Re: Whimsey ~ Artist's Studio (maybe better without the flower?)
Yes, either lose the flower and concentrate more on the background or the other way around.
But without the flower, do you need something showing in the top right corner?
It is almost working.
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15th February 2015, 11:23 PM #6
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Re: Whimsey ~ Artist's Studio (maybe better without the flower?)
That is as gentle a critique as I have seen in a long time. And spot on it is almost working. I will play with it once the sun comes back out. Originally Posted by Geoff F
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