Nicely recovered, there are a few things you can do but may not feel inclined to undertake. I would try removing some of the weeds especially around the face. Some of the weeds along the body are fine, also I would try to add a bit of contrast around the head to give it a bit of separation from the background.
I might try cropping a little wider if it were mine just to show a little more of the surroundings and the critter's body, because to me this one looks more like a scene shot than a portrait. Just an idea. Exposure doesn't look all that bad on the original. Hey, BTW, where did you find this guy, may I ask?
Nicely done, especially the edit of Geoff....
We were visiting the Tetons last summer... where the 'Barn' thats supposed to be the most photographed one. I was trying to take some pics of the mountains with the barn and i looked down and this guy was almost at my feet