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17th February 2015, 03:07 AM
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Last edited by Manfred M; 17th February 2015 at 03:50 AM.
Reason: Fixed link
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17th February 2015, 04:43 AM
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Re: Having a party!
Harmon - your image link was broken in this posting too. Have a look at it here (it's been repaired); the entire [/IMG] string is needed to show the image.
Another nicely posed image, but I'm not quite as sure about the technical execution of it. You've included the door (camera left) and ceiling and roll of seamless (?) on the top. I'm not sure that these do much for your composition. I suspect it would be stronger without these things distracting the viewer.
I suspect that you used the same lighting as you did in your previous posting; your model camera left is lit quite brightly, but the light drop off is quite fast and I find the dark shadow to the camera right is extremely distracting; if almost swallows up your model wearing read.
Conceptually, I think you have something really interesting going on here, but I feel you need to look at your lighting, it's just not working for me.
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17th February 2015, 01:01 PM
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Re: Having a party!
Nice effort, I think more of the shadow should have been included in the image.
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