-
6th March 2015, 03:00 PM
#1
-
6th March 2015, 04:17 PM
#2
Re: Pin Cushion
For me, #2 and #3 have the best composition although they are both a fraction tight on the right side. Would #2 take a tiny bit extra brightness?
-
6th March 2015, 04:28 PM
#3
Re: Pin Cushion
#2 for the exposure and the design effect of the threads.
-
7th March 2015, 12:43 AM
#4
Re: Pin Cushion
Hi Norm!
Man, many are the times I feel just like that pincushion!
I think your shots might be a bit underexposed. The macro shot you favor I have at about one stop underexposure. The others at about a stop and a half. Here is a before and after increasing the exposure by around .90 stops.
As for the cloth? What if you were to re-set the scene and used some nice folds/draping for your cloth? That way, it would look more like a purposefully designed set rather than a flat surface with wrinkles?
Get creative and go wild!
-
7th March 2015, 12:51 AM
#5
Re: Pin Cushion
+1 to what Terry has said.
How are you lighting these shots Norm, the shadows are good and soft.
-
7th March 2015, 01:00 AM
#6
Re: Pin Cushion
Norm,
Terry mentioned the under exposure. I wonder if you are familiar with how to use your camera's histogram to obtain the ideal exposure. If not, check out the tutorial here at CiC about using a histogram.
-
7th March 2015, 02:10 AM
#7
Re: Pin Cushion
A bagpipe pin cushion. How cute is that?! I prefer #3 because #2 needs some room at the top.
-
7th March 2015, 10:43 AM
#8
Re: Pin Cushion
Thanks for the comments - I'll try to answer all your points.
Lighting was natural light from the window behind me - I've haven't explored the intracacies of artificial lighting yet, but will certainly look at the tutorial about histograms.
In my OP I mentioned the ripples in the underlying cloth, but obviously it's not prominent enough.
I think I need a larger surface area than I'm using, 'cos I had to crop closely to avoid unwanted wall - hence the closeness to the RH edge.
Will try the dining room instead of the small bedroom (if I'm allowed )
Posting Permissions
- You may not post new threads
- You may not post replies
- You may not post attachments
- You may not edit your posts
-
Forum Rules