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10th March 2015, 07:42 PM
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Ibn Tulun Old Mosque, Cairo, Egypt
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10th March 2015, 08:47 PM
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Re: Ibn Tulun Old Mosque, Cairo, Egypt
Khaled -- this shot is very simple. I am wondering what time you shot this one? What does the colour version looks like? Just curious...
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10th March 2015, 08:53 PM
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Re: Ibn Tulun Old Mosque, Cairo, Egypt
nice capture and i lovely edit
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10th March 2015, 08:54 PM
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Re: Ibn Tulun Old Mosque, Cairo, Egypt
Hi Khaled,
May I welcome you to CiC as I don't think we have conversed before.
I like the composition and exposure of your shot.
I have one minor suggestion which I would do if the shot were mine ...
The camera is slightly pointed up, although since the perspective distortion (leaning in to centre of verticals) is so small that I probably wouldn't bother to 'correct' them.
However, if you look at the nearest corner of the closest building, it leans a bit to the left, so my suggestion is to rotate the shot slightly clockwise to make that edge parallel to the edge of frame.
Hope that helps, Dave
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10th March 2015, 09:08 PM
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Re: Ibn Tulun Old Mosque, Cairo, Egypt
Khaled,
This is a beautiful image. The contrast between the formal structure of the buildings and the moody sky is interesting. Could I suggest you try a slight reduction in brightness? I think the foreground, is a bit washed out.
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11th March 2015, 01:29 AM
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Re: Ibn Tulun Old Mosque, Cairo, Egypt
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11th March 2015, 03:53 AM
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Re: Ibn Tulun Old Mosque, Cairo, Egypt
I like the simplicity of the shot. Clean simple lines.
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11th March 2015, 04:11 AM
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Re: Ibn Tulun Old Mosque, Cairo, Egypt
I love this image! I played with it just a bit using NIK Viveza, primarily with a global increase in structure (quite a bit) and a global decrease in brightness (just a tiny bit). Then, I selected the foreground using control points and increased the structure (again quite a bit)...
I hope you don't object to my posting this image. We usually accept posting of edited images because it is a lot easier to show changes than just describe them.
I will, of course, remove the image if you object to the posting.
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11th March 2015, 06:24 AM
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Re: Ibn Tulun Old Mosque, Cairo, Egypt
Richard,
Interesting
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