Hi Travis. I like the image. IMO the color balance is a bit on the geen side because the shadows on their faces look greenish. The freckles on Jess's face look green too.
I think you over cooked it. Some strange things going on.
Are you doing post work in photoshop?
Beautiful shot - so pretty too.
I like the expressions you've captured.
There is something weird going on in the area between their shoulders and under their arms.