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    Happiness - sneaking in through a door

    C&C are welcome.

    Happiness - sneaking in through a doorIMG_3400 by patel_tejal, on Flickr

    I have tried to clone the tiny lights. Here is the revised one :

    Happiness - sneaking in through a doorIMG_3400- R by patel_tejal, on Flickr
    Last edited by Tejal; 24th March 2015 at 05:39 AM. Reason: I have been suggested to do some correction in the image, which I have done now.

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    Re: Happiness - sneaking in through a door

    I can't see an image. If you are having problems uploading photos, this post might help.

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    Re: Happiness - sneaking in through a door

    Quote Originally Posted by Geoff F View Post
    I can't see an image. If you are having problems uploading photos, this post might help.

    HELP THREAD: How can I post images here?
    I have fixed the issue now.

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    Re: Happiness - sneaking in through a door

    Excellent frame Tejal

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    Re: Happiness - sneaking in through a door

    Nicely captured, very vibrant colors.

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    Re: Happiness - sneaking in through a door

    Nice shot, Tejal. An interesting setting, lighting and framing, but is looks a bit overprocessed for my personal taste. This is especially apparent in the skin tones.

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    Re: Happiness - sneaking in through a door

    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowman View Post
    Nicely captured, very vibrant colors.
    Thank you

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    Re: Happiness - sneaking in through a door

    Quote Originally Posted by GrumpyDiver View Post
    Nice shot, Tejal. An interesting setting, lighting and framing, but is looks a bit overprocessed for my personal taste. This is especially apparent in the skin tones.
    Thanks for your feedback. I will surely take care of it next time.

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    Re: Happiness - sneaking in through a door

    Quote Originally Posted by fotugraphy View Post
    Excellent frame Tejal
    thanks Raj

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    Re: Happiness - sneaking in through a door

    Quote Originally Posted by Tejal View Post
    Thanks for your feedback. I will surely take care of it next time.
    I find that one can often get away with some level of heavier processing when it comes to architecture, but the moment people are in the image, the processing gives their skin a really un-natural appearance, so a degree of caution is required.

    Again, it is up to you the photographer to decide how you want the image to look.

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    Re: Happiness - sneaking in through a door

    Also, just above his head there are three little bright areas which looks like slits of light coming from another door or something similar. They are slightly distracting to me so I would clone them out.

    Overall, a nice shot.

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    Re: Happiness - sneaking in through a door

    Quote Originally Posted by GrumpyDiver View Post
    I find that one can often get away with some level of heavier processing when it comes to architecture, but the moment people are in the image, the processing gives their skin a really un-natural appearance, so a degree of caution is required.

    Again, it is up to you the photographer to decide how you want the image to look.
    I 100% agree with you. While processing, little consciousness in dealing with contrast & exposure can help to give better look to the image.

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    Re: Happiness - sneaking in through a door

    Quote Originally Posted by Geoff F View Post
    Also, just above his head there are three little bright areas which looks like slits of light coming from another door or something similar. They are slightly distracting to me so I would clone them out.

    Overall, a nice shot.
    . Yes, I have noticed those spots. I also found them distracting, but then didn't edit. I should have cloned them, as you suggested. And yes, thank you very much for your all inputs. Sometimes, certain things come in our mind but we don't implement, but when we get some similar ideas, it gives us confidence
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    Re: Happiness - sneaking in through a door

    Quote Originally Posted by GrumpyDiver View Post
    I find that one can often get away with some level of heavier processing when it comes to architecture, but the moment people are in the image, the processing gives their skin a really un-natural appearance, so a degree of caution is required.

    Again, it is up to you the photographer to decide how you want the image to look.
    This is what I learnt frm manfred 1 year back to give importance to skin tones and now I take a lot of care of the skin tones. Thank you manfred for such valuable suggestion

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    Re: Happiness - sneaking in through a door

    Tejal...beautiful colours and the composition is very good too...just get rid of those three tiny lights and you got a more winning image, just like Geoff said. +1 to Geoff comment. (message #2)

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    Re: Happiness - sneaking in through a door

    Quote Originally Posted by IzzieK View Post
    Tejal...beautiful colours and the composition is very good too...just get rid of those three tiny lights and you got a more winning image, just like Geoff said. +1 to Geoff comment. (message #2)
    Sure, I will correct those three lights . Thanks

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    Re: Happiness - sneaking in through a door

    Very nice image Tejal Although it is nice as it is, I would crop the blue part on the RHS to put the emphasis more on the child.

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    Re: Happiness - sneaking in through a door

    Great photo and very helpful comments regarding processing, cloning out lights etc. There is one further adjustment (obvious to me at least, a personal obsession) for this image - straighten - the door frame and door are not vertical and that catches my eye above all else.

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    Re: Happiness - sneaking in through a door

    Quote Originally Posted by bnnrcn View Post
    Very nice image Tejal Although it is nice as it is, I would crop the blue part on the RHS to put the emphasis more on the child.
    Thanks. I will surely try the crop suggested by you

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    Re: Happiness - sneaking in through a door

    Quote Originally Posted by Colin1957 View Post
    Great photo and very helpful comments regarding processing, cloning out lights etc. There is one further adjustment (obvious to me at least, a personal obsession) for this image - straighten - the door frame and door are not vertical and that catches my eye above all else.
    Ohh..... I will correct it. Thanks for pointing it out.

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