I tend to shoot a bit tighter than you do, Tejal. Another quote for you from the great photojournalist, Robert Capa; "if your images aren't good enough, you're not close enough".
First of all, I like both of your latest postings.
1. Women in the farmyard - a very nice shot and the cows and stalls certainly add the context of where the shot was taken. If I were shooting, I'd be in a bit closer and at a minimum I'd get rid of the bright roofline on the left. It pulls the viewer's eyes away from the subject. I'd probably also try to reduce the amount of building on the right; again it is quite bright and distracting. I'd probably end up with something along these lines.
2. Mother and child - For the second shot; I like the asymmetry and unobtrusive background. I'd straighten the shot slightly, get rid of the "ghost" of the building or electrical pylons in the background and get in a lot closer. I might also consider using a vertical, rather than horizontal format, as I'm not completely convinced that all that negative space on the right buys you much.
I also prefer the last two photos by a wide measure. Rather than crop the first one to eliminate the bright roof on the left, I would probably darken and/or desaturate it so that helpful information about the environment would remain in the photo without being a distraction.
If either the mother or child was looking to the viewer's right, the negative space in that area would play a more effective role in telling the story. Lacking that, I probably would try using a square crop or an 8 x 10 vertical aspect ratio that allows for positioning the two people off-center while limiting the unhelpful, large amount of the negative space. Unlike Manfred, I wouldn't crop as tightly in a vertical format as he did, which is unusual for me because I'm a fan of tight crops. Like Manfred, I would also eliminate the two tall things in the distance.
I do like Mark's post with its great example of how content could affect viewer's perceptions of what is the primary subject..
Regarding Tejal's primary point of the thread; for the 'even number of subjects is bad' "rule", the examples in this thread do not work for me because I believe the two (or four, etc.) 'things' need to be identical - that is identical in shape, form, texture, colour, size.
Think of a shot of two (same colour) chess pieces.
Or in landscape terms; perhaps a row of four identically trimmed trees that are shot from far enough away that we cannot detect the detail differences in their branch structure.
Images where the pairs are not identical just allow our brains to look for and (too easily) find differences - differences that we then use to mentally attribute one of them as the main subject and one as secondary.
Hope that assists the discussion, Dave
Last edited by Dave Humphries; 30th March 2015 at 08:13 PM.
Last edited by Mike Buckley; 30th March 2015 at 08:42 PM.
Mike, I think I'd also exclude all three of your examples on the grounds that as they exceed the edge of frame (and aren't lined up in a simple row), so they don't represent exactly what I had in mind.
You see, you're just too artistic to fall foul of the rule even when dealing with 'evens'
So, Dave, perhaps we need to see the precise criteria of the rule. It seems to be a rule that is so restricting that it would apply to so few photos that the rule itself is an exception.