Chaotic

[Tejal]

Sometimes we find somebody in chaotic condition, brings smile on our face. Here is one such I have tried to capture in my camera .

C & C are welcome.

IMG_7028 by patel_tejal, on Flickr

[Werner]

the two women in focus look interesting - good expressions, nice colours.
maybe a tighter crop could help making this a great picture.

[Shadowman]

Nice capture, the woman in blue obviously likes the camera.

[Tejal]

the two women in focus look interesting - good expressions, nice colours.
maybe a tighter crop could help making this a great picture.

Thanks Werner . I will surely try the crop suggested by you.

[Tejal]

Nice capture, the woman in blue obviously likes the camera.

Yes John. She had noticed me.

[JamesScott86]

Excellent capture - well taken.

[Tejal]

Excellent capture - well taken.

Thank you

[GBO25]

This really is a good shot Tejal with the main subjects nicely lit to atteact the eye. Did you put a vignette around it in post?
Also if you do crop it tighter you'll have to leave the guy in the right foreground in the shot IMHO.

[Tejal]

This really is a good shot Tejal with the main subjects nicely lit to atteact the eye. Did you put a vignette around it in post?
Also if you do crop it tighter you'll have to leave the guy in the right foreground in the shot IMHO.

Thanks Graham. On sides I have tried to down the exposure. Actually light was quite less. I have revised the frame with a little tight crop. Here it is :

IMG_7028- Resivsed by patel_tejal, on Flickr

[Tejal]

the two women in focus look interesting - good expressions, nice colours.
maybe a tighter crop could help making this a great picture.

Hi..Werner, I have cropped the pic and have made it little tight. Hope you will like it.

[GBO25]

Thanks Graham. On sides I have tried to down the exposure. Actually light was quite less. I have revised the frame with a little tight crop. Here it is :

IMG_7028- Resivsed

That's about as tight as you could go I think Tejal. Mind you I still very much like the original as well.

[Downrigger]

Very appealing, successful image, it commands interest and succeeds for me as a composition, in light and color, and in story. I think the strong (I'm imagining this) vignette is good here. I think the result that the main subject resides at the apex of a "V" of lighter hues and luminosity adds strength. I think I rather prefer your initial crop, or at least something less than the second effort.

[Tejal]

That's about as tight as you could go I think Tejal. Mind you I still very much like the original as well.

Yes Graham...I tried to make it a bit tight. But little less or little more crop was also not possible to do. Otherwise it would have lost the feel of Chaotic which I wanted to showcase in this picture. Thanks for your input .

[Tejal]

Very appealing, successful image, it commands interest and succeeds for me as a composition, in light and color, and in story. I think the strong (I'm imagining this) vignette is good here. I think the result that the main subject resides at the apex of a "V" of lighter hues and luminosity adds strength. I think I rather prefer your initial crop, or at least something less than the second effort.

Thanks Mark... . The reason I have kept the original crop -

* There are some human faces in back side- facing in front, by cropping the top side, I didnt want to cut those.
* There is a man in extreme front looking at the camera, by cropping the bottom, i didnt want to cut his face as well.
* If I crop the right side more then the face of the extreme front man's would have gone on the border of the frame.
* If I crop the left side a little then the lady in blue saree would have not got breathing space.

These thoughts were there in my mind while I considered my original crop. Kindly share your thoughts on this.

[Downrigger]

The reason I have kept the original crop - Kindly share your thoughts on this.

I think your reasons make sense, and I think the aggregate effect for composition and story work better with your original crop, too.

[Tejal]

I think your reasons make sense, and I think the aggregate effect for composition and story work better with your original crop, too.

Thanks for your feedback Mark.

[Werner]

Hi..Werner, I have cropped the pic and have made it little tight. Hope you will like it.

yeah, that's about what i had in mind.

[Tejal]

yeah, that's about what i had in mind.

Thanks Werner

[fotugraphy]

lol Yawning... Excellent shot.