Originally Posted by
GrumpyDiver
John - I was very much trying things I normally don't do in portraiture; the Dutch tilt, shooting from below, bare bulb, I tend to do a lot of portraits using a seamless paper background etc. The things are probably fairly minor in the scheme of things, but I was missing things I would have preferred to nail. What you see are the finished versions and I ended up cropping the shots a touch more than I would like.
Image 1 - I didn't quite nail the Rembrandt lighting; my key light needed to be a bit more forward and a touch higher. My fill light reflector should have been angled up a bit more.
Image 2 - This was a crop issue. I don't do a lot of Dutch tilt and a blew where I positioned the subject, and I had to correct that with a crop.
Image 3 - I don't like the position of and spread of the catch lights. I think they need to be up higher and more in the iris part of the eye. Again, as I don't usually shoot from below, I missed setting up the light correctly to do this.
Image 4 - This worked well, but I should have flagged the light because I got a fair bit of spill camera left that I had to correct with a heavier vignette than I would have liked. A more focused light fall would have been better.
Image 5 - I had a hot spot under his camera right eye that I had to spend some time in post correcting. A bit more care in posing would have eliminated that. I also had too much of a hot spot on his forehead that I more or less managed to correct in post, but there is a bit of an artifact from that. I should have set the light source a bit further back; but again being the first time with this setup... The issue is that the histogram looks fine and you can't see the details well enough on the camera screen. Shooting tethered was not really an option.
Image 6 - this is really my least favourite of the set. It didn't work out the way I had hoped. The shadow was well defined, but the way I shot meant I have a large empty space in the top left corner of the image. I shot have dropped the light to move the shadow higher up the wall.