Brian,
Still a tad bit dark, if you increase brightness by a smidge the web becomes more visible without taking away from the rest dramatic composition. Nicely done.
Hi John, it may be that my eyes are tired, or that my monitors are not good enough or even that I do not know enough about Gimp. I have tried 3 or 4 ways to get a tad more brightness and none of them work. By the time the web is noticeably more noticeable the BG is quite distorted. But I will try again tomorrow.