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    Sculptor

    In my this picture I have tried to capture the simplicity of the artist and his excellent art work.

    Your C & C will be highly appreciated.

    Regards,

    Tejal

    SculptorIMG_4769 by patel_tejal, on Flickr

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    Re: Sculptor

    Nicely done.

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    Re: Sculptor

    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowman View Post
    Nicely done.
    Hi John !! Thank you

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    Hi Tejal. The out of focus part on the RHS distracts a bit, I would try a square frame by cropping it. Nice and colorful image

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    Quote Originally Posted by bnnrcn View Post
    Hi Tejal. The out of focus part on the RHS distracts a bit, I would try a square frame by cropping it. Nice and colorful image
    Hi Binnur !!

    I have tried the square crop as well...here it is.

    SculptorIMG_4769 by patel_tejal, on Flickr

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    Re: Sculptor

    Exactly my thoughts.

    You might get away with losing a bit from the bottom and going to 5 x 4 ratio but I suspect square will be the best option.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Geoff F View Post
    Exactly my thoughts.

    You might get away with losing a bit from the bottom and going to 5 x 4 ratio but I suspect square will be the best option.
    I have tried 1:1 crop and yes, it is looking line. I have posted it in my previous comment. Hope you will like it .

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    Re: Sculptor

    The crop looks better Tejal

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    Quote Originally Posted by bnnrcn View Post
    The crop looks better Tejal
    Yes Binnur it is looking better now . Thanks for your suggestion...

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    Re: Sculptor

    A great shot Tejal which is only improved by the crop. Excellent.

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    Quote Originally Posted by GBO25 View Post
    A great shot Tejal which is only improved by the crop. Excellent.
    Thanks Graham !!!

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    Re: Sculptor

    Quote Originally Posted by bnnrcn View Post
    Hi Tejal. The out of focus part on the RHS distracts a bit, I would try a square frame by cropping it. Nice and colorful image
    Binnur beat me to this comment. I see this image as a square crop, eliminating the OOF elements of image right. Sometimes less is more! The image really jumps at me with the square cropping...

    Reducing the brightness of and adding a bit of blue to the area near the top of the image over the sculptor and a little sharpening really helps to make this into a (IMO) great image...

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    Quote Originally Posted by rpcrowe View Post
    Binnur beat me to this comment. I see this image as a square crop, eliminating the OOF elements of image right. Sometimes less is more! The image really jumps at me with the square cropping...

    Reducing the brightness of and adding a bit of blue to the area near the top of the image over the sculptor and a little sharpening really helps to make this into a (IMO) great image...

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    Hi Richard !! The revised one is awesome !! Thanks for your input

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