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24th April 2015, 12:57 PM
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24th April 2015, 01:18 PM
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24th April 2015, 02:10 PM
#3
Re: No Name
Nicely done, but there seems to be a little "fringe" along the black edges.
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24th April 2015, 02:47 PM
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Re: No Name
I love your lighting and the way it compliments his facial features.
My only suggestion would be to back way off the surface blur. It's to obvious in this case and personally I think it's better suited for the more feminine face. Let a man be a man and show some grittiness. Just my opinion, all in all, nicely done and good eye.
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27th April 2015, 01:53 PM
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Re: No Name
Very nice portrait IMO well captured
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27th April 2015, 02:48 PM
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27th April 2015, 02:51 PM
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Moderator
Re: No Name
Jordan - This is an interesting portrait and while I'm not totally sold on the way you've composed the shot, I find that you've really gone a bit too far in your post-processing approach.
On one hand, much of your subject's skin looks artificial and plastic-like and in other places I think you have over-sharpened (the eyes). I think you need more subtlety in your PP work for this image to work.
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28th April 2015, 02:05 PM
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Re: No Name
Hi Jordan, very nice image I think you have gone a bit too far in sharpening and noise reduction(or whatever it is to give the skin that plastic look) but you can easily fix them anyway.
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