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Thread: Another shot ; same sunset
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27th April 2015, 08:19 PM #1
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Another shot ; same sunset
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28th April 2015, 08:20 AM #2
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Re: Another shot ; same sunset
The kiteboarder should have been bigger...at the moment it is just a speck. T'would make a nice effect and addition to the scene. Just a thought...
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28th April 2015, 12:42 PM #3
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Re: Another shot ; same sunset
Thanks Izzie; I agree. It was so small I did not see it in my view finder at all. I only noticed it during post. I think it might have been a sea gull?
Originally Posted by IzzieK
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28th April 2015, 05:03 PM #4
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Re: Another shot ; same sunset
Very nice image
I would crop the water just a bit .
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28th April 2015, 07:10 PM #5
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Re: Another shot ; same sunset
Thanks Binnur. I think that will improve it. Here is my attempt at improvement:- Originally Posted by bnnrcn
Very nice image I would crop the water just a bit .
Last edited by joebranko; 28th April 2015 at 07:27 PM.
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28th April 2015, 08:41 PM #6
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Re: Another shot ; same sunset
Better Joe...I couldn't believe how a simple crop could make a difference. I must remember that...
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28th April 2015, 09:59 PM #7
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Re: Another shot ; same sunset
Thanks Izzie, I never know how much to crop. I tend to want to include everything which is "attractive" to my eye. In this case there was some nice reflection in the water in my original. Originally Posted by IzzieK
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29th April 2015, 08:17 AM #8
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Re: Another shot ; same sunset
To get some, needs sacrifice some others, but if only for small technicalities, I would have left what attracted me in the first place...but that is just me...
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29th April 2015, 03:09 PM #9
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Re: Another shot ; same sunset
Hello Joe
on my screen your picture seems to be very "noisy" especially in the sky. As I have no idea about the camera-lens combination you used, I would propose less ISO and a tripod next time. And regarding framing I agree with Izzie: less is more.
If you allow I suggest next time you compose a "sundowner" something like this:
If you disapprove my editing, tell me. I will erase it.
Erwin
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29th April 2015, 04:54 PM #10
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Re: Another shot ; same sunset
No problem with the editing. It looks good! Thanks Erwin! Originally Posted by Krawuntzel
Hello Joe
on my screen your picture seems to be very "noisy" especially in the sky. As I have no idea about the camera-lens combination you used, I would propose less ISO and a tripod next time. And regarding framing I agree with Izzie: less is more.
If you allow I suggest next time you compose a "sundowner" something like this:
If you disapprove my editing, tell me. I will erase it.
Erwin
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29th April 2015, 05:54 PM #11
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Re: Another shot ; same sunset
The crop looks better Joe
Originally Posted by joebranko
Thanks Binnur. I think that will improve it. Here is my attempt at improvement:-
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29th April 2015, 07:56 PM #12
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Re: Another shot ; same sunset
Thanks Binnur Originally Posted by bnnrcn
The crop looks better Joe
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