Life - C & C are welcome !!

[Tejal]

Recently I have posted one picture of the same place where there where two human elements. Here there is only one.

Your C & C on it will be highly appreciated.

Thanks

IMG_3467 by patel_tejal, on Flickr

[John 2]

That's nice Tejal. Nice composition, particularly the way that you have framed is head against the darkness of the doorway and it tells a story.

[Tejal]

That's nice Tejal. Nice composition, particularly the way that you have framed is head against the darkness of the doorway and it tells a story.

Thanks John

[Rob Ekins]

Very nice..

Maybe a crop concentrating on his upper body and the machine would have a little more impact?

[Tejal]

Very nice..

Maybe a crop concentrating on his upper body and the machine would have a little more impact?

Thanks Robbie...here is the 1X1 crop as suggested by you :

IMG_3467 by patel_tejal, on Flickr

[Shadowman]

With the woman included the doorway was less of a distraction, the warmth of the wood draws my eyes over the man's shoulder and I spend a little bit more time there than necessary. Also, there is a bright spot upper right within the door, either lighten the shadows or go completely dark.

[jcuknz]

It depends on what you want to show .... the man and his environment as original or two old items, man and machine, and that should be a vertical shot.

[bnnrcn]

Hi Tejal I like your original shot with the environment. I would level it though. IMO this composition is better than your other one with a woman and this man.

[DEAN01]

+1 to Binnur's comment. Keep the photos coming, Tejal.

[Tejal]

With the woman included the doorway was less of a distraction, the warmth of the wood draws my eyes over the man's shoulder and I spend a little bit more time there than necessary. Also, there is a bright spot upper right within the door, either lighten the shadows or go completely dark.

Thanks John for your valuable inputs and that bright spot, yes, i will make it completely dark.

[Tejal]

It depends on what you want to show .... the man and his environment as original or two old items, man and machine, and that should be a vertical shot.

Thanks John for your input. Here I tried to showcase, a man busy with repairing the machine as well as the environment also.

[Tejal]

Hi Tejal I like your original shot with the environment. I would level it though. IMO this composition is better than your other one with a woman and this man.

Thanks Binnur

[Tejal]

+1 to Binnur's comment. Keep the photos coming, Tejal.

Thanks Dean ...and yes I will be posting regularly !!