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    C & C are welcome :

    My bikeIMG_1653 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

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    Re: My bike

    Nicely done, just enough of the child is in focus to see his admiration of the toy.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowman View Post
    Nicely done, just enough of the child is in focus to see his admiration of the toy.
    Thanks for your feedback John .

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    This one is a bit strange, Tejal. While I like the overall composition and the soft focus on the boy, the mixed colour temperatures really don't work for me; I don't think the boy has greenish skin in real life. I also feel the crop is a touch tight on the left. Again, I find you are missing on your black and white points, so the image is not as crisp as it should be.

    The green cast can be neutralized with a magenta overlay, but just on the boy's skin (the eyes are not quite right yet, but I just wanted to provide a general thought here). I think this gives a more realistic and pleasing look. Unfortunately, picking up coloured overtones because of where the subject is standing can be a bit problematic.


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    Quote Originally Posted by GrumpyDiver View Post
    This one is a bit strange, Tejal. While I like the overall composition and the soft focus on the boy, the mixed colour temperatures really don't work for me; I don't think the boy has greenish skin in real life. I also feel the crop is a touch tight on the left. Again, I find you are missing on your black and white points, so the image is not as crisp as it should be.

    The green cast can be neutralized with a magenta overlay, but just on the boy's skin (the eyes are not quite right yet, but I just wanted to provide a general thought here). I think this gives a more realistic and pleasing look. Unfortunately, picking up coloured overtones because of where the subject is standing can be a bit problematic.


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    Thanks for the feedback Manfred. The pic was taken at night, in one exhibition, where lights were like this. Light part i didnt touch while processing. But yes while processing, I could do the adjustment, which I skipped here . I will correct it as per your suggestion. Thanks once again

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tejal View Post
    The pic was taken at night, in one exhibition, where lights were like this
    That would make sense. Fluorescent and compact fluorescent bulbs are everywhere and they tend to throw a green colour cast.

    Mixed lighting, especially when fluorescent lights are involved, can be problematic and impossible to fix 100%.

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    Quote Originally Posted by GrumpyDiver View Post
    That would make sense. Fluorescent and compact fluorescent bulbs are everywhere and they tend to throw a green colour cast.

    Mixed lighting, especially when fluorescent lights are involved, can be problematic and impossible to fix 100%.
    I tried but then i felt things are getting more imbalance in frame so left it as it is .

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    The idea is there and then the shot...I do not know what camera you've used here, but in the D810 there are 8 flourescent options when shooting. If you do not have a D810, the following is the itemized list in Kelvin equivalent...

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    'Hope this helps....

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    Quote Originally Posted by IzzieK View Post
    The idea is there and then the shot...I do not know what camera you've used here, but in the D810 there are 8 flourescent options when shooting. If you do not have a D810, the following is the itemized list in Kelvin equivalent...

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    'Hope this helps....
    Thanks Izzie for your valuable guidance. I have Canon 1100D. Not sure whether it has this facility or not. I will check it .

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