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    Sneaking through the window - Cat : STREET

    This picture was taken while walking through a street of my town. It is an old city area, situated in the heart of the city. I have tried to capture one candid moment in my camera in this street.

    Kindly share your comments and critics for my betterment .

    Thanks - Tejal

    Sneaking through the window - Cat : STREETIMG_3391 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

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    Very, very nice Tejal.

    I'd probably tweak a few things in post; it's a touch muddy, so get adjust the black point and white point to fix that, perhaps straighten the edges a touch and possible crop to get rid of the grating along the top to simplify the image a bit. A slight vignette might help too.

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    Quote Originally Posted by GrumpyDiver View Post
    Very, very nice Tejal.

    I'd probably tweak a few things in post; it's a touch muddy, so get adjust the black point and white point to fix that, perhaps straighten the edges a touch and possible crop to get rid of the grating along the top to simplify the image a bit. A slight vignette might help too.

    Sneaking through the window - Cat : STREET
    Oh...great....for so long i tried to do adjustment, but some how, may be because of my crop, i couldnt do this. This is want i wanted. And thank you very much for your valuable input .

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    Re: Sneaking through the window - Cat : STREET

    Nicely framed and exposed.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tejal View Post
    Oh...great....for so long i tried to do adjustment, but some how, may be because of my crop, i couldnt do this. This is want i wanted. And thank you very much for your valuable input .
    The crop was quite tight at the bottom. I ended up rebuilding the bottom left corner of the image (Photoshop CC 2014 content aware fill) so as to not crop off the man's fingers.

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    Quote Originally Posted by GrumpyDiver View Post
    The crop was quite tight at the bottom. I ended up rebuilding the bottom left corner of the image (Photoshop CC 2014 content aware fill) so as to not crop off the man's fingers.
    Oh.....I have revised it and i have taken care of the fingers too in my revised version. Thanks a lot. Yes, it was there in my mind to take care of the fingers while cropping the image.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowman View Post
    Nicely framed and exposed.
    Thanks John !!

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    Re: Sneaking through the window - Cat : STREET

    nice capture

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    I would suggest that naming the tool being used for a correction would assist ... I did it in my editor with the perspective tool followed by a crop after initially adjusting the black and white levels [ which to me is a form of increasing the contrast without using the contrast/brightness tool] and I am at a loss to know what needed to be 'rebuilt' in the left hand corner.

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    Re: Sneaking through the window - Cat : STREET

    Thank you.

    Quote Originally Posted by Gayathrie Senaratne View Post
    nice capture

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    Re: Sneaking through the window - Cat : STREET

    Thanks for your input. Yes I have tried the prospective correction tool too but some how I could not succeed.


    Quote Originally Posted by jcuknz View Post
    I would suggest that naming the tool being used for a correction would assist ... I did it in my editor with the perspective tool followed by a crop after initially adjusting the black and white levels [ which to me is a form of increasing the contrast without using the contrast/brightness tool] and I am at a loss to know what needed to be 'rebuilt' in the left hand corner.

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    Re: Sneaking through the window - Cat : STREET

    Very nice image Tejal, I like Manfred's edit

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    Re: Sneaking through the window - Cat : STREET

    Nicely seen and well captured Tejal. The vignette makes a difference and it's always worth exploring.

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    Re: Sneaking through the window - Cat : STREET

    Very nice image, Tejal....I like the composition and Manfred's edit very much...You could use the ruler tool to straighten then crop...

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    Quote Originally Posted by bnnrcn View Post
    Very nice image Tejal, I like Manfred's edit
    Thanks Binnur . Yes it is looking quite good. I have revised it as per his suggestion.

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    Quote Originally Posted by John 2 View Post
    Nicely seen and well captured Tejal. The vignette makes a difference and it's always worth exploring.
    thanks John for your input.

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    Quote Originally Posted by IzzieK View Post
    Very nice image, Tejal....I like the composition and Manfred's edit very much...You could use the ruler tool to straighten then crop...
    Thnanks Izzie !!! Yes, I should have used it.

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    Re: Sneaking through the window - Cat : STREET

    Beautiful image Tejal. Now, what is he looking at?
    The crop is a +.
    Irene

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    Quote Originally Posted by ied View Post
    Beautiful image Tejal. Now, what is he looking at?
    The crop is a +.
    Irene
    Thanks . On that morning their religion saint was visiting the city. So, they were waiting for his car to pass through that road.

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