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    On the beach - C & C are welcome

    Kindly share your comments and critics

    On the beach - C & C are welcomeIMG_3220-BW by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

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    Re: On the beach - C & C are welcome

    This is a WoW shot Tejal...I like the composition very much andwith a bland sky Black and White suits it very much...the lady in the picture is the only thing I can nit about because she was posing for you. There is nothing wrong with it but for an environmental shot like this, a bit more "working" pose with her husband would have been better...

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    Re: On the beach - C & C are welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by IzzieK View Post
    This is a WoW shot Tejal...I like the composition very much andwith a bland sky Black and White suits it very much...the lady in the picture is the only thing I can nit about because she was posing for you. There is nothing wrong with it but for an environmental shot like this, a bit more "working" pose with her husband would have been better...
    Thanks a lot . She (my friend) was actually standing there.To get her attention towards me i called her and she turned towards me. Some candid moments also I have captured. I will post them shortly .

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    Re: On the beach - C & C are welcome

    Nicely done, very dynamic composition.

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    Re: On the beach - C & C are welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowman View Post
    Nicely done, very dynamic composition.
    thanks

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    Re: On the beach - C & C are welcome

    Very nice composition Tejal I would brighten the sand just a little bit as my eyes immediately go there instead of the whole scene.

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    I wonder about a shot from a slightly lower position to place the horizon a fraction higher?

    Would that make the nets appear higher and have even more impact? But too late now. Alternatively, a very small crop from top and right side for a similar effect? I really do mean small though.

    Good composition; it even has a bird on one of the poles and a distant ship.

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    Re: On the beach - C & C are welcome

    Well seen, Tejal, I really like this composition. I agree with Izzie, though, I would prefer it if the woman were not looking directly at the camera.

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    Re: On the beach - C & C are welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by bnnrcn View Post
    Very nice composition Tejal I would brighten the sand just a little bit as my eyes immediately go there instead of the whole scene.
    Thanks Binnur !! Let me try ...

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    Re: On the beach - C & C are welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by Geoff F View Post
    I wonder about a shot from a slightly lower position to place the horizon a fraction higher?

    Would that make the nets appear higher and have even more impact? But too late now. Alternatively, a very small crop from top and right side for a similar effect? I really do mean small though.

    Good composition; it even has a bird on one of the poles and a distant ship.
    Thanks for your input. I will check my raw files. I may have some shot which is taken in low angle. And thanks a million for noticing crow and the ship ... .

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    Re: On the beach - C & C are welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by FootLoose View Post
    Well seen, Tejal, I really like this composition. I agree with Izzie, though, I would prefer it if the woman were not looking directly at the camera.
    Thanks . and next time i will get some candid shot

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