Princess Elizabeth 2 - for Dave Humphries

[John 2]

Dave, based on your comment, I tried this as an alternative crop.

[Dave Humphries]

Thanks John,

Although you didn't have to, this works for me.

I see you removed the other track's curve in order not to have it too far right and actually closer to 'leaving frame' at RHS.

[IzzieK]

Very good edit, but I miss the obligatory noise...

[Geoff F]

Looks very good to me.

[bnnrcn]

Looks much better

[John 2]

Thanks all.

[marlunn]

John, very nice, I do prefer this to the previous - its much more punchy and grabs my eye more

[CaolIla]

I haven't seen the earlier version but I think this looks really good. I like the BW PP.

*EDIT
OK, now when I have seen the earlier version I think the first one was far better.

[John 2]

Thank you Mark, thank you Mats. Mats, on balance, I think I'm with you. It's how I originally conceived it.