Portrait

[Melanie90]

Hi everyone, any suggestion?

[Digital]

Melania, this is a nice portrait; however your subject's left eye is out of focus. Did you focus on the right side of her face?
This also could be caused by a shallow depth of field.


Bruce

[Shadowman]

Nice capture, I like the style with the DOF and hot highlights.

[klpurkett]

Very nice work Melania! I like the image a lot. The only thing I find a bit distracting is the catch light in her left (not in focus) eye. The catch light in her right eye is beautiful... Not super obvious, but just a spark of light there, yet in the left eye the catch light looks much more obvious. Is there any way to make these match, or at least more similar? I love the colors here, the pose, the lighting, DOF... Pretty much everything about it.

[William W]

. . . any suggestion?

I'd suggest to have other options available from the shoot.

Referring to that point of options: I'd be interested to know if you did take another shot in the set - from the other side of her face and with her two Eyes in focus and the White Flower Out of Focus?

WW

[fotugraphy]

Any specific reason for using harsh lights? Have ya tried using a diffused light? Have ya used any diffuser infront of flash or strobe?

[Melanie90]

I'd suggest to have other options available from the shoot.

Referring to that point of options: I'd be interested to know if you did take another shot in the set - from the other side of her face and with her two Eyes in focus and the White Flower Out of Focus?

WW

Hi William,
yes I took other shots but I don't like them :/

[Melanie90]

Any specific reason for using harsh lights? Have ya tried using a diffused light? Have ya used any diffuser infront of flash or strobe?

Hi,
no reason, I just used natuarl light....