Portrait shoot - June 17, 2015 #2 - C&C Welcome

[fotugraphy]

Hi, going forward on my photography venture I stopped and clicked another shot. Can you please review it and let me know what exactly is missing for it to make it much better?

It is an image from my previous photoshoot, and learnt about the eyes direction as suggested in my previous image.
Portrait shoot - June 17, 2015 - C&C Welcome

Please provide your views and suggestion with composition, frame, crops and processing.

Thank You

PS : Please click on the image for lightbox screen view (Highly recommended)

[Digital]

Raj, I like the portrait; however that bright rock to me is distractive.



Bruce

[fotugraphy]

Raj, I like the portrait; however that bright rock to me is distractive.



Bruce

Thanks a lot for your kind review and suggestion I will try to tone down that bright rock in the background

[Shadowman]

Nice effort, I would have suggested the model bring her hand forward so that it's not partially visible. Agree about the bright rock, the right arm is flooded in reflected light, looks brighter than the dress.

[fotugraphy]

Nice effort, I would have suggested the model bring her hand forward so that it's not partially visible. Agree about the bright rock, the right arm is flooded in reflected light, looks brighter than the dress.

Thanks a lot for your kind review and suggestion. I will take care of framing and light in my next photoshoot

[bnnrcn]

Very nice image Raj. The lady is so beautiful that although I agree with the comments above , I'm not strongly distracted by anything in the image

[thegman]

Raj, very nice shot, one that I would happily like to own, even with above comments. Well done.

[fotugraphy]

Very nice image Raj. The lady is so beautiful that although I agree with the comments above , I'm not strongly distracted by anything in the image

Thanks a lot for your kind review and appreciation

[fotugraphy]

Raj, very nice shot, one that I would happily like to own, even with above comments. Well done.

thanks a lot for your valuable review and appreciation