Support - C & C are welcome !!

[Tejal]

Kind share your C&C on my following shot.

This picture was taken few months back. I found some people, busy painting and arranging water pots, where i have capture this picture .

IMG_3766 as Smart Object-1 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

[rpcrowe]

Tejal...

This is a very interesting shot with lots happening. However, it doesn't seem to busy to me.

The triangle of three persons against the triangle of the pottery makes this visually interesting to me.

If there could be an improvement, it might be that I would like this shot a bit better if the child's face were visible, if only in a profile...

[Tejal]

Tejal...

This is a very interesting shot with lots happening. However, it doesn't seem to busy to me.

The triangle of three persons against the triangle of the pottery makes this visually interesting to me.

If there could be an improvement, it might be that I would like this shot a bit better if the child's face were visible, if only in a profile...

Thanks Richard for noticing triangles and of course for your feedback. About that child, yes, I wanted to take her face and I waited there for quite a long, but she was quite shy. I have some other shots too, where her face is visible. I will check the raw files. If I get some good shot, then will surely share here with you all .

[Ndukes]

This is a great moment observed and captured well. The only slight negative for me is the top edge is busy and a little distracting especially with the line of pots disappearing at the corner. It is possible that a better framing might not have been possible and, maybe a slight shading along the top edge might help.
It still makes a great composition.

[Tejal]

This is a great moment observed and captured well. The only slight negative for me is the top edge is busy and a little distracting especially with the line of pots disappearing at the corner. It is possible that a better framing might not have been possible and, maybe a slight shading along the top edge might help.
It still makes a great composition.

Thanks Neville for your valuable feedback. Actually field situation was such, that, it was almost impossible to avoid cluttered background. But yes, slight shading could be helpful and I will try to do that. I have not done much in PP with a thought of keeping it for street category.

[IzzieK]

Richard and Neville's comment made me think...I agree with you about being cramped at the top part of this image, but could you have better isolate these three and the rest of them pot by changing your angle? I am just asking...sometimes your position means a lot could have been better achieved...

[Tejal]

Richard and Neville's comment made me think...I agree with you about being cramped at the top part of this image, but could you have better isolate these three and the rest of them pot by changing your angle? I am just asking...sometimes your position means a lot could have been better achieved...

Thnx for your comment Izzie . Actually there were so many pots and I was very conscious that, by mistake also i must not break any of them. There were some other people also and were they are siting, on the right side, there was a shed and 2-3 persons were siting. Some how it was bit difficult to get these three together in frame properly. This pic will give some idea : It is a SOOC shot -

IMG_3760 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

[Shadowman]

Nice done, I like the angle of view of the second image.

[bnnrcn]

I like #1 very much, nice and colorful composition

[Tejal]

Nice done, I like the angle of view of the second image.

Thank you

[Tejal]

I like #1 very much, nice and colorful composition

Thank you very much.

[IzzieK]

I kinda prefer this second one because it feels that there are more breathing space all around...Just remove that partial person at the right side and this will be more perfect....please........... just this one more ask...OK? Then I will shut up. (like as if I will...)

[Tejal]

I kinda prefer this second one because it feels that there are more breathing space all around...Just remove that partial person at the right side and this will be more perfect....please........... just this one more ask...OK? Then I will shut up. (like as if I will...)

ha ha ha....no worries...you can ask for 1000 times . Let me see, whether i could do the cloning nicely or not or i have some other shots too, which I will share.