Helpful Posts: Following on from my previous thread (LINK) I have this morning picked out another image from my visit to Saltwick Bay and processed it for posting on here. This is a different composition with the wreck more "In your Face" IYSWIM.
As always I welcome your thoughts, comments and critique.
This is a thirty second exposure I will have used a grad but I didn't make a note of what flavour. That's another of my schoolboy errors. My old headmaster was correct with his "Peter must try harder" comment on my school report
Exif: 5D3, 17-40 at 17mm, ISO100, f13, 30sec.
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Thread: Its that Bay again
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21st July 2015, 10:34 AM #1
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Its that Bay again
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21st July 2015, 10:53 AM #2
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Re: Its that Bay again
I quite liked the previous image but this one I like even more. There's just something about the composition that draws my eye. I think it's that the wreck is such a beautiful focal point. Well done!
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21st July 2015, 11:11 AM #3
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I agree with Toby. It is also interesting that elements of this image are much closer to complying with the rule of thirds - perhaps that is making it stronger?
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21st July 2015, 11:17 AM #4
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Re: Its that Bay again
Definitely a stronger image for me as well. However, I don't like the framing of the large rock formation in the background by the ship because there's not enough space around the rock formation. Check out the ghosting around the piece of metal sticking up in the air probably caused by post-processing.
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21st July 2015, 11:34 AM #5
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I really can't say if the previous image or this one is stronger. I think they are both very nice in their own ways
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21st July 2015, 02:22 PM #6
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Nicely done, atmosphere looks too beautiful for a wreck.
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21st July 2015, 08:02 PM #7
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I like this "in your face" view too, Peter...just wondering how it would look like without that rock formation there if at all...or move it on the right...just a thought...
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21st July 2015, 11:20 PM #8
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Nice image but I agree with Mike about the framing around the rock. Originally Posted by Mike Buckley
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