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18th August 2015, 10:19 PM
#1
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18th August 2015, 11:52 PM
#2
Re: Art in the Pens
Nice series, glad you turned an obligation into a benefit.
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19th August 2015, 08:22 AM
#3
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19th August 2015, 08:38 AM
#4
Re: Art in the Pens
I am with John in his comments here...nice series...(+1 to Shadowman). Now that reminds me not to whine when I am being dragged to go somewhere (Bad girl!) I have no interest in...Now I am sorry about the lost opportunities...moving on....
Even though I like all of them especially with narratives, I particular am very fond of #5 -- especially the explanation of why you did selective colouring for it. One good reason for it...I will remember this. #1 is a very sweet shot...I like the artistic rendition of #3 too...whereas #4 is a great catch there...I love all of them...!!!
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19th August 2015, 09:21 AM
#5
Re: Art in the Pens
Nice series, John. I like the first and 4th but in #1 I would like to see you zoom right in. A half portrait of the subject (waist upwards) would still contextualise her and draw the reader into the face and hands.
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19th August 2015, 09:32 AM
#6
Re: Art in the Pens
I like these John, good clear and interesting shots. Nice work
Dave
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19th August 2015, 05:17 PM
#7
Re: Art in the Pens
Very nice series John. The camera setting you used gives very natural colours and skin tones. The only thing that bothers me a little in # 5 is the transition from the colour to monochrome areas - most notably on the floor and pen railings. The foreground floor has a nice warm tone and the bottom 2 railings also show some colour but then the remainder are monochrome. Having never tried this myself I have no idea whether a more gradual transition is possible or whether you might want to try elimination the colour on the all of the rails and floor.
Does the cattle market retain and olfactory ambiance?
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19th August 2015, 06:50 PM
#8
Re: Art in the Pens
Very nice series
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20th August 2015, 07:42 AM
#9
Re: Art in the Pens
Thanks all. Izzie, I don't really mind going to these events. I enjoy the art as well and there are even a few photographers exhibiting.
Good thought Greg. I had just seen these as day out shots but making more of the portrait aspect might just make a comp image (in a portrait section).
Helen, It can be a bit bracing when you first enter but you don't notice it after a while. I might take the sponge tool to the railings to de saturate them and see what it looks like.
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