Looks good... I like the pose and the even light on this image...
I often am reluctant to PP portraits of mature women however, there is on thing which i would guess would not offend anyone.
Selecting the subjects teeth and then desaturating them a bit and brightening them a TAD.
I might hesitate to refer to that quite attractive lady as being a mature women.mature women
Aside from my liking the picture as a whole...she does seem to have pensive look on her face...
maybe thinking "do I really want to do this?"
Much better John...I don't notice a change in the bottoms???
I like that edit better too...