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    She sells seashells

    Before I spend much time on the technique...how might I improve on it?
    Candle was placed image left with mirror on the right
    Balancing the candle flicker was the result of a four second SS at ISO 100 and f/8 and stacking.

    She sells seashells

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    Re: She sells seashells

    I like it. An even darker BG might work. And a matte black stand to eliminate the glare at bottom left. But the lighting on the shells themselves is lovely.

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    Re: She sells seashells

    Hi William,

    I think Dan has got it covered on the improvements aspect; definitely the glare on the stand needs to be toned way down or eliminated by 'flagging' the candle, putting just that bit in shadow.

    After that, yes, a slightly darker background wouldn't hurt.

    Still nice though and although I missed the mention of stacking in the text on first reading, I realised you must have done so to achieve that DoF.

    Very nice - although I do feel cheated out of a 'she' - I was expecting it might have been a street (beach) portrait from the thread title
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    Re: She sells seashells

    Nicely done.

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    Re: She sells seashells

    Most of the left edges seem a fraction on the over bright side to me. Certainly an excellent idea.

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    Re: She sells seashells

    This was the first time using candles...gotta work on technique...it is viable though.

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    Re: She sells seashells

    Beautiful, William! How long did it take you to set this one up?

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    Re: She sells seashells

    I loved it William

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