John, the lady in the center is (IMO) quite lovely.
The gray haired OOF head is somewhat distracting.
Is that the obligatory phone in the hand about to take a 'selfie'?
I reckon you were spotted by the one at the rear
John,
One quick look at your photo and I felt in love with the lady in the centre. Now I finally know what street photography is all about. Thanks
Andre
John, I agree with Richard, the centre lady is quite stunning
I am with the fan of the beautiful lady, John...you nailed her shot there nicely...and not too harsh either...
I agree with Richard, John. She is stunning and if you were to crop out the head on the LHS, you not only lose the distraction of the grey hair but (for me) you would improve the strength of the comp. It would focus attention even more on the subject given that the remaining head on the left is anonymous and the lady on the right is looking into the comp. I would pull back the highlight on the telescope as well though.
John, just had a closer look at it but I won't post the result. However, before you crop it, use the LHS as a source to clone out the face behind the girl, then lift the shadows in the girl's face slightly and add a bit of sharpening. It really is a very nice image and worth a bit of PP.
Last edited by John 2; 6th October 2015 at 02:24 PM.
Very nice image John. I agree with John2 about cropping the image for a stronger and less distracting composition
Striking image, John.