Natural Art - C&C are most welcome - 4

[Tejal]

Your C & C will be highly appreciated.

Regards,

Tejal

IMG_8466 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr


IMG_8481 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

[Shadowman]

I see faces in the first and dancers in the second, nicely exposed.

[Tejal]

I see faces in the first and dancers in the second, nicely exposed.

Many thanks John, but which is better ? And how could it be made more presentable ? Any suggestion ?

[Shadowman]

Many thanks John, but which is better ? And how could it be made more presentable ? Any suggestion ?

Tejal,

I like the second one better as it seems to be undulating. The first could be made better by redirecting the lighted area to what you want the viewer to concentrate most on. As it is presented, the lighting leads my eyes upward towards the right, with the second image the light leads my eyes from left to right but I'm given more to gaze at before composition edges towards darkness.

[Tejal]

Tejal,

I like the second one better as it seems to be undulating. The first could be made better by redirecting the lighted area to what you want the viewer to concentrate most on. As it is presented, the lighting leads my eyes upward towards the right, with the second image the light leads my eyes from left to right but I'm given more to gaze at before composition edges towards darkness.

Thanks a lot for your guidance. I will try to revise it and will show you too .