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12th October 2015, 08:47 AM
#1
River Liffey 'again'
Two more from my wanderings along the Liffey close to Sally Gap in County Wicklow.
Vertical format this time, and a little more water.
Nikon Df with 24-120 at 24mm. 1/40 at f16, iso 100
Nikon Df with 24-120 at 24mm. 1/125 at f11, iso 100
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12th October 2015, 04:15 PM
#2
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12th October 2015, 04:21 PM
#3
Re: River Liffey 'again'
That really is a lovely looking location. You must enjoy shooting there. IMO the second shot is the better of the two. Some nice detail in the FG and the sense of the river running off into the distance. The first shot had the potential to be the better of the two but is a bit tight on the left side, clipping the river bank.
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12th October 2015, 04:23 PM
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Re: River Liffey 'again'
Beautiful place and lovely colors
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12th October 2015, 07:34 PM
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Re: River Liffey 'again'
Vertical landscapes can be tricky but these have worked well. My only slight complaint is that tiny piece of rock in the bottom left corner. I would clone it over with water.
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12th October 2015, 10:42 PM
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Re: River Liffey 'again'
Hi Neville,
Geoff beat me to it suggesting losing the lower left corner rock in #2.
With #1, it looks like it would benefit from a significant clockwise rotation.
Also, a little more on left edge wouldn't hurt.
I really like the other examples in your first thread.
HTH, Dave
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13th October 2015, 01:08 AM
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Re: River Liffey 'again'
I reckon #2 is the best between the two and with a more pronounced cloud formation there adding to the element of the whole shot. Beautiful place indeed...
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13th October 2015, 06:01 AM
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Re: River Liffey 'again'
Thanks all for comments and most helpful feedback. I shall return to this place and Cloughlea which is close by for late Autumn colours in about 4 to 6 weeks. Even without my camera the area is really tranquil and dramatic in a quiet way (if that's not a complete contradiction) for wandering about but that would be unthinkable for me.
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13th October 2015, 09:10 AM
#9
Re: River Liffey 'again'
I'm with Dan on this one, Neville, you have made great use of the lines in this composition.
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13th October 2015, 04:12 PM
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Re: River Liffey 'again'
What gorgeous photographs!
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14th October 2015, 07:05 AM
#11
Re: River Liffey 'again'
Thank you Greg and Pritam for your feedback. This area is attractive in a quiet subtle way but it's worth while to 'dig deep' to find the compositions.
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