Where I'm going OR an interesting mistake?

[Stagecoach]

This image is so good that I especially look forward to that! My only misgiving about the two versions is that I wish there was at least a little more negative space on the left side.

I was waiting for the left side to be mentioned Mike, unfortunately I never had it framed and also lost a small amount when straightening the horizon.

Tonight I got one chance to try a deliberate planned pan on a similar boat, same shutter speed of 1/25s but rubbish result !

[Stagecoach]

I love the second version Grahame (I was a bit 'meh' about the original), the subtle colours, enhanced by the white borders, really make the picture.

I do tend to agree with Mike, a small gap between boat and frame on left would be preferable - if that could be achieved in PP by canvas stretch and cloning - the difficulty being to get a believable 'end' to the boat - or 'stern' as the boat people call it

HTH, Dave

Thanks Dave.

I think it's worth having a go at stretching it just a bit so a job for tomorrow as it looks like rain. It will be good practice.