Helpful Posts: Not really happy with any of these. Any ideas on how I might have done better.
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6th November 2015, 05:38 PM #1
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Fall at the Fairgrounds - Need Suggestions for Improvement
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6th November 2015, 06:29 PM #2
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Re: Fall at the Fairgrounds - Need Suggestions for Improvement
1st and 2nd image, consider how the shaded portion of the building helps or hinders revealing it's structure. Compare the skies in 1 and 3 to that displayed in 2. In the 3rd, do you think displaying more of the RHS tree would help or is it not an issue?
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6th November 2015, 06:30 PM #3
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Re: Fall at the Fairgrounds - Need Suggestions for Improvement
Nothing really wrong with them, Jim, but I wonder about cropping away some of the foreground in various amounts from each of them. So as to create an obvious main subject area.
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6th November 2015, 07:40 PM #4
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Re: Fall at the Fairgrounds - Need Suggestions for Improvement
Jim I was wondering if moving the WB so that the 1st and 3rd images as not as warm but cooler. Your 2nd image has a good white off the metal uprights of the rail maybe take a WB from there then see what you get. Just wondering.
Cheers: Allan
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7th November 2015, 02:49 AM #5
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Re: Fall at the Fairgrounds - Need Suggestions for Improvement
#1 and #2 are very nice; #3 lacks a point of interest?
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