The first is a really nice vista.
Re Dave's comment: the underlying math and effects are not identical, but the effects of a clarity increase in Lightroom and a local contrast enhancement in photoshop (or anything else that allows you to use unsharp mask sharpening) are quite similar.
I think the image might do well with a bit of additional contrast, which you could apply with the curves tool. However, there is a complication if you use only Lightroom, and images like this are one place it can be noticeable. That is, when you increase contrast in LR, or with the normal blend mode in photoshop, you are also increasing saturation. In photoshop, you can avoid this in a couple of different ways, the simplest of which is to use a luminosity blend mode for the curves adjustment. Lightroom doesn't allow you this, so if increasing contrast makes the image oversaturated, you have to compensate by reducing saturation or vibrance.
I'll use your image to illustrate this. In both of the edits below, I added a local contrast adjustment and vibrance, similar to what you did. I then added contrast with a curves tool. I wasn't trying to get the contrast right, just to add enough that the effect I am referring to would start to show up. The first image applies the curve with a normal blend, which is effectively what you would be doing in LR. The second uses a luminosity blend mode. In this case, the effects aren't large, but they are visible. (For example, look at the grass in the foreground.) I have had some other fall landscapes where the effects have been larger.
In your case, since you are using only LR, I would start by playing with the curves tool to see what amount of additional contrast looks best, and then back off vibrance or saturation a little bit if and only if it seems like the contrast adjustment oversaturated the image.