Sam - two very nice shots that give a completely different interpretation of the same subject. I like them both, but prefer the B&W. That backlighting of the smoke works really well.
I find that you got a bit too aggressive with the vignette in that version. I think a more feathering would let you do a heavy vignette and get away with it, almost as if the drums were being hit with a spot light.
I think the first one would work better if you crank up the contrast to add some grittiness. I think it may need a bit of leveling too as the image seems to slant up from left to right. There are a few filters in Nik Color Efex that could really grunge it up too.
It's difficult for me to compare the two images because the monochrome versions are post-processed so much more effectively in my mind than the color versions.
Thanks Mike - I agree. I was not actually looking for a comparison but just wanted to see if the resulting B&W was liked from an artistic POV. I was using the original image as reference to show what I had digitally to work with. It was probably a mistake to do that but I thought it might be of interest to someone.
Hi Sam I like the original photo very much...subtler if there is a word to describe it for me...the edits are good too, but I still prefer the original because it looks natural without the processing. I think the B/W is over processed. Just my opinion or I am already tired for tonight...
Hi Sam,
I still find the vignette too heavy in B&W V.2, but that's just me.
In the original post, I didn't like the weak colours, the revised colour one is great.
Cheers, Dave
Last edited by Rob Ekins; 7th December 2015 at 12:33 PM.
+1 to Dave's comments. He sums up my feelings on the second set very well.
I love the BnW image and I find the second version with less vignette better