Hi John IMO the light at the top left corner distracts a bit, I would crop the columns on the very left and right hand sides for a plainer and less distracting look.
Now, it seems much better John
Doubtless, the edit has much positive impact; excellent
Yes, you have now lost that horrible bit of out of focus area in the bottom right corner.
I like the edit John. Love seeing long exposures like this.
Yes to the second version! Such a difficult shot both to expose and post-process. I love the little bit of flare at the automobile. Captured at the ideal time of night; the dark blue sky rocks!
The edit looks better, John. I like it very much...