Team work - C&C are welcome !! (A)

[Tejal]

IMG_1557 as Smart Object-1 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

[Shadowman]

I'd say, of the three Amma is working hardest. Nicely composed.

[Tejal]

I'd say, of the three Amma is working hardest. Nicely composed.

Thanks John . Yes, Amma (mother) always try that her children do not need to work hard. Am I right ?

[IzzieK]

As mothers, we always wish better for our children, hope that they surpass our conditions better, have better education and all that. Some kids forget that, how hard we worked for them when they were young...just a sentiment...

Anyway, back to topic, this one got a nice pp but I do not know what is lacking for me to see here...??? Hopefully some others will be able to point that out so I can see how they see.

[Shadowman]

Thanks John . Yes, Amma (mother) always try that her children do not need to work hard. Am I right ?

Tejal,

So true.

[Tejal]

As mothers, we always wish better for our children, hope that they surpass our conditions better, have better education and all that. Some kids forget that, how hard we worked for them when they were young...just a sentiment...

Anyway, back to topic, this one got a nice pp but I do not know what is lacking for me to see here...??? Hopefully some others will be able to point that out so I can see how they see.

My son is very young and he is still mumma's boy, so cant comment at present. But wish me luck that i get same love from him in future too. .

[rpcrowe]

IMO, the large expanse of blank sky takes away from the image a bit.

I cropped a little closer, increased the structure globally and darkened the sky and increased the sky saturation a bit.



Another thought might be to replace the sky with interesting clouds...

[bnnrcn]

Hi Tejal I like Richard's tight crop, but I prefer your other shots of the same environment as they presented some action. In this image people look as if they are standing to pose for you. Did they pose for you?

[IzzieK]

My son is very young and he is still mumma's boy, so cant comment at present. But wish me luck that i get same love from him in future too. .

Let us see some photos of your son too...they are very, very nice until they turn 10 years of age and became too vulnerable to hearing stupid, daring comments from older siblings.

[robertmpoole]

A great capture and I love the repetition of the pose. The picture seems flat though, I would increase saturation and contrast or maybe try a mono conversion.

Rob

[Tejal]

IMO, the large expanse of blank sky takes away from the image a bit.

I cropped a little closer, increased the structure globally and darkened the sky and increased the sky saturation a bit.



Another thought might be to replace the sky with interesting clouds...

Little closer is looking nice . Thanks for the suggestion !!

[Tejal]

Hi Tejal I like Richard's tight crop, but I prefer your other shots of the same environment as they presented some action. In this image people look as if they are standing to pose for you. Did they pose for you?

No no... they were doing their work. I had not told them to pose for me

[Tejal]

Let us see some photos of your son too...they are very, very nice until they turn 10 years of age and became too vulnerable to hearing stupid, daring comments from older siblings.

He is of 9 years and a single child. Here are some pics. Hope you will like them

93f070dfd8d13ca987d546b22595bcafbbca9f64 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

2ca725039ebf00058f5827fb013f9cc3a549827c by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

a30128ae40a3f888961ff97e1f811e148fd47427 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

bae34f5d5f33c6f0ae5855b447feb2cb6be93adb by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

IMG_20151016_082605 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

[Tejal]

A great capture and I love the repetition of the pose. The picture seems flat though, I would increase saturation and contrast or maybe try a mono conversion.

Rob

Thanks Robert. I think B&W is a good idea. I will try it.

[RBSinTo]

Tejal,
I think this is an interesting photo as it gives us a glimpse of a way of life that is foreign to us here in North America.
That being said, I think the shot would have been stronger if you had been standing a bit further back to give us more information on their work environment. Additionally, I think the three subjects are too cramped within the frame, and appear to be static and posing.
Opening up the shot in addition to showing more about where they work, would have given them space to move into.
I hope my comments are helpful.
Robert

[Shadowman]

He is of 9 years and a single child. Here are some pics. Hope you will like them

93f070dfd8d13ca987d546b22595bcafbbca9f64 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

2ca725039ebf00058f5827fb013f9cc3a549827c by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

a30128ae40a3f888961ff97e1f811e148fd47427 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

bae34f5d5f33c6f0ae5855b447feb2cb6be93adb by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

IMG_20151016_082605 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

Nice portraits, did you do the editing on all?

[Tejal]

Nice portraits, did you do the editing on all?

Oh... These are all mobile casual clicks. Auto adjustment done on mobile.

[IzzieK]

Playful kid...glad you only have one...two of them will send me bonkers...

[Shadowman]

Oh... These are all mobile casual clicks. Auto adjustment done on mobile.

They processed and transferred very well.

[Tejal]

Tejal,
I think this is an interesting photo as it gives us a glimpse of a way of life that is foreign to us here in North America.
That being said, I think the shot would have been stronger if you had been standing a bit further back to give us more information on their work environment. Additionally, I think the three subjects are too cramped within the frame, and appear to be static and posing.
Opening up the shot in addition to showing more about where they work, would have given them space to move into.
I hope my comments are helpful.
Robert

Thanks Robert for your comment. Back ground was quite clutter so, avoided taking the back ground in the frame. Nothing was so interesting to incorporate. But as you said, some action was required. I will try to get some better shot, next time .