Brian, I have a feeling you are trying to make a point here. Dare I suggest black and white or am I missing some reference? It is an interesting image like this.
I am afraid that my knowledge of Latin is deficient and google research did not reveal the nuances. But I still like the image.
That last edit is very vibrant, probably not what you wanted but definitely different. Original looks like it was captured under cloudy conditions, last edit makes it appear to be a sunny environment.
I liked the actual color than the subdued one ; very nice
Well they are both nice Brian But I would blur the BG a bit in the first shot as the colors are similar to each other and the BG distracts.
commune rosa abtenua or adtenua est (or a word similar - it's been a lot of years...). A common rose is lessened?, reduced? shrunken? Don't think/can't remember if there's a direct translation of "subdued".
It's true what they say, once the Jesuits get ye , they've got ye for life...