Thanks for taking the time with this Manfred.
I think that whilst I 100% percent agree with your comments as generalisations, I think that the image works better as a whole.
A. The title of the shot, combined with the positioning of the subjects against the fact that the human eye tends to view left to right, serves to demonstrate who is the primary subject and who is a secondary player. YMMV
Your crop of the kissing couple is a little tight IMO and suffers with the incursion into the frame of the bench you're not able to crop out. Of course it could be cloned out, but then it looks like you're spying on teenage kids kissing = creepy
The extraction of the second image of the two ladies is simply a shot of the backside of two women. I'm sure there's a popularity for that sort of thing (all those rap songs can't be wrong
) but there's no story, there's no engagement.
The light was harsh that day, it was a bit of an impromptu photo walk, and conditions weren't ideal. DOF is governed to a certain extent by equivalence, but my 35 F1.4 lens on APSC won't look a million miles away from the DOF of a 50mm F2. At longer tele lengths DOF becomes quite shallow on all but the smaller sensor cameras
I'm not sure if you've seen the other thread I started today?
But this shot is from the same afternoon and as you can see I can work with shallow DOF quite happily if the mood takes me
I'm not a seasoned street 'tog, in fact its something I've only recently started to develop a taste for... But my interest in it, currently centers around the observance of the human animal, which at my current level, means wanting a shot with interaction (or the lack of interaction) in it, by so fair this generally means multiple subjects.
I'm not planning to go and buy a FF camera just to have a street tool, in fact IIRC all those street togs seem to swear by M6s or M9s with 28 or 35 'crons, so wide can work quite well for street IMO. YMMV.
But PLEASE don't think I don't value your (or anyone's input) into my shots, we are all still learning, and my I truly feel I've received some wonderful tips, advice and encouragement during my fairly brief time here