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Originally Posted by
Dave Humphries
Hi Izzie,
Apologies for getting this done later than I promised above.
It's OK...we all have things to do besides...
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I had a couple of false starts; I read the background info on the first few and got side tracked :o
then I had to avoid reading other's feedback (today) so it doesn't 'stop me thinking' about each as I view them
So, taking these as documentary shots of the exhibits in the museum, here are my thoughts, with apologies to others if I don't acknowledge what they have already mentioned. The only distraction now is some great music playing which will have my fingers drumming the desk instead of typing ;)
If I don't mention something, it is because you have done as well as I feel I could, even with hindsight.
You are obviously severely limited by the placement of the subject within the building and external factors such as lighting at the time of your visit, not to mention trying to exclude those pesky other visitors :)
The cars part of the museum is just a small building where they have an old hearse, some odd bicycle, etc. and they are almost side by side separated in middle with ropes and stuffs, and plenty of walkabout tourists like us with children and babies.
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I would love to have access to these exhibits 'without the ropes' to get a series of shots on each exhibit, bet you do too.
#1 You have a good view of the vehicle here which demonstrates several of the unusual characteristics of the 1960 DiDia 150.
I was upstairs so it was a good view but it was quite a wait to take the shots because of people milling around.
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With the benefit of hindsight, it is easy for me to suggest that we could probably have seen more of the glorious paint if this had been shot with a polarising filter. From this elevated viewpoint, having that set to reduce reflections off the horizontal surfaces of the bonnet, roof and boot lid (hood, roof and trunk in US speak?) would have helped a lot, but the best solution might have been to shoot a few shots with the CPL set at different angles and combine in PP. The CPL would also have an effect on other horizontal surfaces such as the polished floor and table top/display case.
You will not believe this--I was kicking myself in the dark areas of the car museum when I realized I was having a hard time with my exposure triangle thingie because I have the CPL in front of the lens. I think I will have to start using my rectangular one. I have both Cokin and Lee from the old film days. With the round CPL it is always a habit to forget it is there...and to think that I just bought myself a variable ND...dumb, huh?
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However, eliminating all reflections totally would (I think) be a mistake, since it may look 'false' in the context of the surroundings. I also accept that the use of a polariser would have extended shutter speeds to the point where a mono/tripod would have been necessary and that may not be possible under the rules of the establishment, let alone the weight issue for you carrying it - given your wayward 'mule' :D
My beloved mule is tolerating me so he is OK. I cannot bring my tripod yet, even the lightest travel one I have. I have to leave my handbag in the car so I do not to bring it or ask my mule to. The camera is enough weight for my healing chest. My armpit is OK so far, I just do not want to abuse it as I have my appointment with my surgeon on this coming 16th February...
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At the risk of upsetting the continuity of this series (e.g. if this were a standalone image), you could consider cropping some, (say 10% image width), off the left hand side.
Ooops, I'm rambling too much, I'll try to be more concise.
#2 Same thought applies regarding use of CPL with the 1963 Lincoln Continental. The second most obvious thought here is the apparent white balance issue caused by the mixed lighting - unless it really is that purplish colour.
I tried and I tried to remove the bluish/purplish tint to make it white because it is really a white car. I still couldn't get it so I left it as is...I will have to try harder some more...
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#3 "St. Louis BUILT":
This looks to have been captured somewhat over exposed, which is a shame as you didn't need all that 1/3s, which has caused a camera shake issue. I can see that your choice of shooting position was dictated by the post for the rope barriers, amongst many other factors, so under these circumstances, I think you chose the viewpoint wisely. If that had not been there, you could have take a shuffle to the right and excluded the background, although that would have compromised how the right front wheel overlapped the background panels. If mine, I might also have corrected the leaning verticals of background elements. Ooops, I'm rambling again.
I forgot to do that ... I will try harder to correct that. I only noticed after I uploaded the darn thing!
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#4 Huppmobile:
This shot has several issues and is the worst of the series so, if I'm gonna be "harsh", this is the one (and I know you love it really).
It is over exposed.
It is blurred due to vertical movement camera shake (70mm at 1/10s), but also there's something funky going on down by the automobile's left front wheel, looks like a slipped mask. The shot also has a strange 3D, 'jump off the screen' effect caused by the crude application of artificial DoF blur, I'm afraid this doesn't work for me.
I am not happy with my pp on this one...but Jack like it. I was quite surprised he did or someone did. I understand that you will see this one and call me out on that...I will have to try this one too along with #3.
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#5 Tunnel:
I think this is also slightly over exposed Izzie. Pretty good viewpoint, spoiled by the rails not running all the way to the distant truck, but I can't blame you for that :D and you did a pretty good job of trying to line them up with your shooting position and height.
That said, I'm not sure the out of focus bar across the top aids the composition, if you play in LyteBox and move it off the top of the monitor screen, I think the image is improved.
I tried it without the bar but left the bar because I want to remember how hard I was sitting down on my ass on the rubbles there and the mark of wet on my jeans like I wet myself. Bill was laughing hard when I stood up so from then on, I tried to keep away from where there are people before they noticed. I like it the way it is now. I was expecting that you will say it is crooked or something...
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#6 Your 'perspective shot':
This works quite well, if mine, and if I weren't worrying about inconsistencies of aspect ratio across the series, I'd crop that sunlit area of foreground tarmac off the lower edge. The next most obvious thing I might do is clone remove the orange road cone. If I'm really being pedantic, I'd ask what caused the funny sky smudge effect above the roof of "USATC 1149" on the left? Taking padantry one step further: it looks like there is some uncorrected lateral CA which is most visible on the white wheel rims and lettering at the left edge off frame.
I did not notice that until you mentioned it. I must correct that. I was more worried about the bleakness of the sky that I put that graduated filter from Nik's. You see in message #28 in my response to Jack, it isn't there...so I am thinking that must be a spill on from the filter effect. I will try to look again...
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#7 US 662:
I like this one, the crop is tight, but no doubt necessary to avoid worse issues we cannot see, but I trust you that this is better than the alternative. Odd choice of shutter speed and ISO though ;)
This must be because I still have my unnoticed CPL on my lens...I have to remove those things from my lens so I don't make a mistake again. I had been struggling with my exposure triangle because of that. I need a lot of checking and a list on what to check before I even start going out of the house.
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#8 Stage Coach style:
An interesting exhibit, the most significant comment is that I think the black point needs setting - it all looks a bit too 'grey', if doing that causes the left most post to appear too black, you could crop it off.
I had explained this one in my response to Binnur already.
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#9 Barrett Station:
Of interest for context for how US museums operate and interact with visitors (did you ring that big bell?). Can't think of anything to suggest to improve it. I was disappointed I couldn't see your reflection :D
There was a kid before me who did and as I was struggling with my camera, I missed that shot of him ringing that bell.
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I hope that shot-by-shot is helpful, now I'll see what others said and if I missed anything important.
I can see that you have put some thought in to your shooting position for these, so bear in mind I appreciate that when I criticise small errors - these are more than just the snaps that even I take when I visit such places.
Well done, Dave
Oh...that is very, very nice, Dave...Yes, your critique is always helpful that is why I said I missed your looking at my shots...and also Binnur...your are both wise but different in so many ways. I truly appreciate this very much...I will look into these corrections you have suggested tomorrow. It was because of you that I challenged myself to get my "adult camera" on that day despite what pain I still feel. And yesterday, I shot some for my Week 2 February and again some for today...seeing that we will stranded here at home with that snow on the ground and those little flakes still falling until Thursday...Thank you so much again and again for your help.
Izzie