One more attempt at light painting.

[JBW]

[Shadowman]

Very nice.

[Wavelength]

Liked it; i think there should have been more light at the main entry door in the ground floor

[Dave Humphries]

Hi Brian,

I tend to agree with Nandakumar about it needing a little more light at the front.

Not sure if you're after any more critique; but if this were mine and I was presenting it as a finished image, there are a few things I'd do:

crop a slither off the right hand side
clone out the pale thing and stick/cable on the left hand side

Hope that's helpful, Dave

[JBW]

Hi Brian,

I tend to agree with Nandakumar about it needing a little more light at the front.

Not sure if you're after any more critique; but if this were mine and I was presenting it as a finished image, there are a few things I'd do:

crop a slither off the right hand side
clone out the pale thing and stick/cable on the left hand side

Hope that's helpful, Dave

Would i be posting here if I didn't hope for critique? I do have others with more light on the bottom part. It's raining today so i shall probably work on one. I could remove the plank from the left but it is just a natural for here where canals and mud make planks part of the landscape.

[Manfred M]

Brian - the light looks like it was coming from the top in this image; the roofs of the buildings are brighter than any other part of the shot. Try bringing in the light at different angle and different places (high, low, left, right) and see how that changes the image you are getting.

[JBW]

Brian - the light looks like it was coming from the top in this image; the roofs of the buildings are brighter than any other part of the shot. Try bringing in the light at different angle and different places (high, low, left, right) and see how that changes the image you are getting.

The next night out I shall do that.