No title (2) - C&C are most welcome !

[Tejal]

Kindly share your C&C for for my below images.

Regards,

Tejal

IMG_3030 as Smart Object-1 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

IMG_3041 as Smart Object-1 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

[Shadowman]

At first glance very lifelike. Nicely done.

[Tejal]

At first glance very lifelike. Nicely done.

. thanks John for your comment.

[Manfred M]

Tejal - I find these shots are just so busy, that I have nothing to hold my attention. You seem to want everyone to focus on the men opening the door / heading into the shop. They almost appear to be an afterthought with all of the image space you have dedicated to the clothing display on the figurines.

I think the shot is far too busy to work well.

[Tejal]

Tejal - I find these shots are just so busy, that I have nothing to hold my attention. You seem to want everyone to focus on the men opening the door / heading into the shop. They almost appear to be an afterthought with all of the image space you have dedicated to the clothing display on the figurines.

I think the shot is far too busy to work well.

Thanks Manfred for sharing you view. Even I was also feeling that something is going wrong with this, but was unable to understand what.

[DEAN01]

Although somewhat cluttered, I find the second shot to be very interesting. A very nice slice-of-life capture.

[Shadowman]

Thanks Manfred for sharing you view. Even I was also feeling that something is going wrong with this, but was unable to understand what.

The only thing wrong with the image is the poorly positioned wigs and curiosity of why some of the youthful mannequins are bald and others have plastic hair and who is the target market for the fashion.

[rpcrowe]

IT IS BUSY but, I do like it very much! The mannequins act as leading lines directing my eye to the persons entering the shop. I like #2 with the face of the customer visible a bit better than #1.

My one problem with either image is the shadow covering the tops and faces of the larger mannequins. This can easily be adjusted using the dodge tool at about 50% or by selecting the area and brightening it...

[Geoff F]

Exactly my thoughts.

[Tejal]

Although somewhat cluttered, I find the second shot to be very interesting. A very nice slice-of-life capture.

Thanks Dean for your comment.

[Tejal]

The only thing wrong with the image is the poorly positioned wigs and curiosity of why some of the youthful mannequins are bald and others have plastic hair and who is the target market for the fashion.

he he he ..... agree with you.

[Tejal]

IT IS BUSY but, I do like it very much! The mannequins act as leading lines directing my eye to the persons entering the shop. I like #2 with the face of the customer visible a bit better than #1.

My one problem with either image is the shadow covering the tops and faces of the larger mannequins. This can easily be adjusted using the dodge tool at about 50% or by selecting the area and brightening it...

thanks a lot for your valuable suggestion. Yes, I could work on shadow part. I think it will give a good look to the pic.

[Tejal]

Exactly my thoughts.

thanks for your comment.